Poem: The Living Trash Can

Binky The Clown · 01-12-2002, 12:09 AM

Here is my first poem. First you must know that Olean is pronounced Oh-Lee-An, no Oh-Leen. The last board I was on there was a little misunderstanding.

There once was a place called Olean
And in this place lived a living trash can
he was about to pounce on a child
when down from the sky fell a can of salsa (mild)
He swooped right down and grabbed him hard
And threw him into a pool of lard

orald · 01-12-2002, 01:15 AM

This work isn't published somewhere?

***Tessar*** · 01-12-2002, 11:30 AM

for once in my life I'm absolutly speechless.

so what exactly was that suposed to be about?

Aragorn · 01-12-2002, 12:53 PM

Hey, Tess, I thought you were speechless...

Binky The Clown · 01-12-2002, 12:56 PM

You like my poem? Yay! Then you'll love my other poems. I'll try to post up one about every month or so. I like to take my time making poems.

Sakata · 01-13-2002, 07:17 PM

Hey Blinky, your about 10 years old correct?

Binky The Clown · 01-14-2002, 04:27 PM

Hey dude, the name's Binky, not Blinky... I hate it when people mess up my name.

And I'm 13, in case you want to know.

Reverie · 01-15-2002, 01:19 PM

Well, it's disturbingly reassuring to know that these master works of yours take time

***Tessar*** · 01-15-2002, 03:11 PM

it's just a touch...... ahhhhhhhh..... disgusting.......

still who am I to be pointing a finger and saying anything like "well thats bad poetry" because I'm shure mine is bad aswell.

don't go and get mad at me please.

I think you have a very creative mined and could do many good poems but....... if I were you I would not use that one as a guide to any other works of your's

do you have more? if so I would love to see them. please put them up.

samwise of the shire · 01-15-2002, 06:13 PM

That was certainly..... uh different. Welcome to the entmoot Binky.
The utterly um confused
Sam
PS. I'm a writer too. When the mood takes me I write written landscapes.

fireworks19 · 01-15-2002, 06:28 PM

guys...i thought it was kinda cute...hi binky.

Binky The Clown · 01-16-2002, 04:28 PM

Um... I don't know... It's just the way you typed that... (shudders) Oh well, thanks all, I'm glad you like it. I have many more.

01-12-2002, 12:09 AM	#1
Binky The Clown Sapling Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Land of Cheese Posts: 13	Poem: The Living Trash Can Here is my first poem. First you must know that Olean is pronounced Oh-Lee-An, no Oh-Leen. The last board I was on there was a little misunderstanding. There once was a place called Olean And in this place lived a living trash can he was about to pounce on a child when down from the sky fell a can of salsa (mild) He swooped right down and grabbed him hard And threw him into a pool of lard

01-12-2002, 12:53 PM	#4
Aragorn Elven Warrior Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Anywhere but where I should be. Posts: 369	Hey, Tess, I thought you were speechless... __________________ And they carried them to the flatlands But they died along the way And they built up with their bare hands What we still can't do today. EIDRIORCQWSDAKLMEDDCWWTIWOATTOPWFIO till the day I die.

01-13-2002, 07:17 PM	#6
Sakata Elven Warrior Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Lothlorien Posts: 216	Hey Blinky, your about 10 years old correct? __________________ "When evil people come to destroy me, when my enemies and foes attack me, they will stumble and fall. Though a mighty army surrounds me, my heart will know no fear." -Psalms 27:2-3 -Dare you venture into Gollum's Lair? JESUS LIVES!

01-15-2002, 01:19 PM	#8
Reverie Enting Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Back Home!! Posts: 57	Well, it's disturbingly reassuring to know that these master works of yours take time __________________ Tasty Bird Parts...?

01-15-2002, 06:13 PM	#10
samwise of the shire Radically Tolkienited Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: If home is where the heart is, and my heart is in heaven...that should answer your question. <+>< Posts: 967	That was certainly..... uh different. Welcome to the entmoot Binky. The utterly um confused Sam PS. I'm a writer too. When the mood takes me I write written landscapes. __________________ Jesus is my all in all <><+<><+<><+<><+<><+<><+ People who are so concerned with escapism do have a name...we call them jailers. ~J.R.R Tolkien Radically Saved, Totally Tolkienited GOD... BLESS... AMERICA...

01-12-2002, 01:15 AM	#2
orald Enting Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: 2 blocks from Minas Tirith Posts: 59	This work isn't published somewhere?

01-12-2002, 11:30 AM	#3
*Tessar* Master and Wielder of the Cardboard Harp of Gondor Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: IM IN UR POSTZ, EDITIN' UR WURDZ Posts: 6,433	for once in my life I'm absolutly speechless. so what exactly was that suposed to be about?

01-12-2002, 12:56 PM	#5
Binky The Clown Sapling Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Land of Cheese Posts: 13	You like my poem? Yay! Then you'll love my other poems. I'll try to post up one about every month or so. I like to take my time making poems.

01-14-2002, 04:27 PM	#7
Binky The Clown Sapling Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Land of Cheese Posts: 13	Hey dude, the name's Binky, not Blinky... I hate it when people mess up my name. And I'm 13, in case you want to know.

01-15-2002, 03:11 PM	#9
*Tessar* Master and Wielder of the Cardboard Harp of Gondor Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: IM IN UR POSTZ, EDITIN' UR WURDZ Posts: 6,433	it's just a touch...... ahhhhhhhh..... disgusting....... still who am I to be pointing a finger and saying anything like "well thats bad poetry" because I'm shure mine is bad aswell. don't go and get mad at me please. I think you have a very creative mined and could do many good poems but....... if I were you I would not use that one as a guide to any other works of your's do you have more? if so I would love to see them. please put them up.

01-15-2002, 06:28 PM	#11
fireworks19 Elven Warrior Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Indiana Posts: 156	guys...i thought it was kinda cute...hi binky. __________________ Just Watch the Fireworks Just Meet Fireworks =)

01-16-2002, 04:28 PM	#12
Binky The Clown Sapling Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Land of Cheese Posts: 13	Um... I don't know... It's just the way you typed that... (shudders) Oh well, thanks all, I'm glad you like it. I have many more.

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