Entmoot
 


Go Back   Entmoot > Other Topics > Writer's Workshop
FAQ Members List Calendar

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 04-24-2006, 12:15 PM   #1
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
do you guys think its bad to use lotrs names like...use the name rivendell and lorien in your book? should i change the names a little?


my other one is about a girl who goes into a story to find out why the story is leaking into hers...still not finished...does anyone know the cost to publish a book?
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-24-2006, 04:27 PM   #2
Acalewia
Halfelven Daughter of the Dunedain, President of Entmoot
 
Acalewia's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: In trouble. As usual.
Posts: 4,674
I don't know. I've seen LotR names in everyday life. There's a behavioral center near where i live called Rivendell. *scraches head* HMM What do you guys think?
__________________
"Acaly und Hektor fur Presidants fur EntMut fur life!"~ inked

Don't meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.

"Don't be such a sour wolf" Stiles ~ Heart Monitor

http://www.wattpad.com/user/IceQueenofMitera
Acalewia is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-24-2006, 06:59 PM   #3
Earniel
The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator
 
Earniel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium)
Posts: 14,363
Personally I would avoid using LoTR names in your own writings if you intend on publishing it. If only because the Tolkien Estate seems to employ some very enthousiastic laywers. I remember the instance where the post-company Shiremail got a letter from them demanding they removed the "Shire" part out of their name. Like it was no ordinary word before the books.

Also, If I would read LoTR-named places such as Rivendell in other people's writings I might see it as a lack in imagination on the part of the writer. Still, it depends on the case.

If for instance you write about an Elven city or settlement with a clear LoTR name, then yes, the writer could have done much better than merely re-using Tolkien's material. It's almost like fanfiction then.

If on the other hand you have a character that lives in a camper and has decided on a whim to name his home Lorien because, while he can't remember where he heard it from, he thought the word sounded kind of cool; or a character who has a dog named Frodo, then it is much more pleasant (for me) to read. In some cases it can even be a way to add something to a character without looking like a writer that can't write without ripping off Tolkien. IMO you just have to consider the seperate cases carefully.
__________________
We are not things.
Earniel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2006, 01:24 AM   #4
Gwaimir Windgem
Dread Mothy Lord and Halfwitted Apprentice Loremaster
 
Gwaimir Windgem's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Thomas Aquinas College, Santa Paula, CA
Posts: 10,820
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tamuril Sirfalas
do you guys think its bad to use lotrs names like...use the name rivendell and lorien in your book? should i change the names a little?
What the Frog-mod said. Listen to her.
__________________
Crux fidelis, inter omnes arbor una nobilis.
Nulla talem silva profert, fronde, flore, germine.
Dulce lignum, dulce clavo, dulce pondus sustinens.

'With a melon?'
- Eric Idle
Gwaimir Windgem is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2006, 11:57 AM   #5
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eärniel
Personally I would avoid using LoTR names in your own writings if you intend on publishing it. If only because the Tolkien Estate seems to employ some very enthousiastic laywers. I remember the instance where the post-company Shiremail got a letter from them demanding they removed the "Shire" part out of their name. Like it was no ordinary word before the books.

Also, If I would read LoTR-named places such as Rivendell in other people's writings I might see it as a lack in imagination on the part of the writer. Still, it depends on the case.

If for instance you write about an Elven city or settlement with a clear LoTR name, then yes, the writer could have done much better than merely re-using Tolkien's material. It's almost like fanfiction then.

If on the other hand you have a character that lives in a camper and has decided on a whim to name his home Lorien because, while he can't remember where he heard it from, he thought the word sounded kind of cool; or a character who has a dog named Frodo, then it is much more pleasant (for me) to read. In some cases it can even be a way to add something to a character without looking like a writer that can't write without ripping off Tolkien. IMO you just have to consider the seperate cases carefully.
like i was thinking of using rivendell, lorien, mirkwood, rohan. like the actual places and the characters go to them. all i am using is the names and thats it...do you think thats harmful? and what about using Lady Galadriel as a character?
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2006, 12:08 PM   #6
Earniel
The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator
 
Earniel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium)
Posts: 14,363
Then basically you are writing fan fiction. My bad, I thought you were talking about using them in orginal fiction.

There's absolutely nothing wrong or harmful with fan fiction. Valandil for example writes fan fiction about Middle-earth and those stories are wonderful. (Check out the thread 'Visitors come to court')

But publishing your fan fiction, as in printing it in books and selling, would obviously be impossible.

And erm... , I notice I went rather off-topic here so that's the last I'm going to say about it in this thread.
__________________
We are not things.
Earniel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2006, 12:13 PM   #7
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eärniel
Then basically you are writing fan fiction. My bad, I thought you were talking about using them in orginal fiction.

There's absolutely nothing wrong or harmful with fan fiction. Valandil for example writes fan fiction about Middle-earth and those stories are wonderful. (Check out the thread 'Visitors come to court')

But publishing your fan fiction, as in printing it in books and selling, would obviously be impossible.

And erm... , I notice I went rather off-topic here so that's the last I'm going to say about it in this thread.
valandil? ha! thats the name of one of my characters horses!! why would it be impossible to publish? would they sue me?
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2006, 12:34 PM   #8
Earniel
The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator
 
Earniel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium)
Posts: 14,363
You named a horse after a king and Elendil's grandson to boot? Sacrilege! Although I'd like to see Val's face when he reads that. LOL!

Copyright issues will prevent you from being able to print fan fiction. You have no legal ownership over the characters and places that Tolkien created, they belong to the Tolkien Estate.

Therefore you can't make money on them by using them in stories that will printed and sold. And the Tolkien Estate has, as I said, rather active lawyers. Even websites that offer for instance a catalogue with Tolkien's poems and songs will receive a cease-and-desist letter the moment the lawyers get wind of it. Suing is, I take it, the next step for those of hard hearing, and the Estate is well within its right to sue.

Even Peter Jackson wasn't even able to make a movie without purchasing the filming rights to do so. That should give you some indication.

A publisher that publishes something in violation with somebody else's copyright can expect a heavy fine at least. So finding a publisher that wants to take the risk in printing unauthorised fan fiction will be rather tricky.

Therefore fan fiction is almost solely limited to the internet. Granted, there are some writers/filmmakers that allow certain other writers to use their created universes in their stories and those stories can be published. Star Wars and Star Trek come to mind. Isaac Asimov even created a whole universe for the simple reason of letting other writers use it to write stories in. But even so, in all those cases permission is a must and requirement.

Off topic again, that's it! I'm splitting this into a seperate thread.
__________________
We are not things.

Last edited by Earniel : 04-26-2006 at 12:39 PM.
Earniel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2006, 01:39 PM   #9
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
[QUOTE=Eärniel]You named a horse after a king and Elendil's grandson to boot? Sacrilege! Although I'd like to see Val's face when he reads that. LOL!
hehehe sorry about that...you should show him to this thread then...mabye i can get a good laugh out of him?
Copyright issues will prevent you from being able to print fan fiction. You have no legal ownership over the characters and places that Tolkien created, they belong to the Tolkien Estate.
so i could change the names alittle...........
Therefore you can't make money on them by using them in stories that will printed and sold. And the Tolkien Estate has, as I said, rather active lawyers. Even websites that offer for instance a catalogue with Tolkien's poems and songs will receive a cease-and-desist letter the moment the lawyers get wind of it. Suing is, I take it, the next step for those of hard hearing, and the Estate is well within its right to sue.

A publisher that publishes something in violation with somebody else's copyright can expect a heavy fine at least. So finding a publisher that wants to take the risk in printing unauthorised fan fiction will be rather tricky.

soooooooo...i could buy rights to the names could i? or i could slightly alter them.. i change Elrond's name to Elron....arwen's to Arewen with an accent over the first e...and Rivendell to Rivendale
Lorien to lorrien
Lady Galadriel to Lady Galladrial
right....would that WORK?!?!?!???
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone

Last edited by Tamuril Sirfalas : 04-27-2006 at 01:40 PM.
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2006, 02:17 PM   #10
Earniel
The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator
 
Earniel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium)
Posts: 14,363
I highly doubt you could buy the rights to write and publish Middle-earth themes stories, especially not as a young, starting writer. It not only seems highly improbable to me, I also think it would have been done aaages ago by a lot of people if it was possible.

Changing one letter in a name would probably still be too recognisable and personally -mind you, personally- I think it would be pointless and a little silly to try. To me, it would make me look upon the writer who uses those tactics as someone very dishonest, someone who still tries to rip off a well-known and succesful book and does so badly. Or someone who didn't bother to invest in creating his or her own characters, ergo: a writer who has no heart for writing. In case of fan fiction, like the stories you can find on the net, people will merely assume the writer didn't research properly or reread well enough if there are errors in character-names.

Either way it's bound to make you look bad. Anyway, if you have to resort to these tactics I think you might as well try real, original fiction, which IMO will be much more appreciated by the readers.

IMO another thing about writing with other people's characters is that it is also more difficult because you will have to live up to the reader's idea of that character. Tolkien wrote about Galadriel and now the readers know her. If someone else wrote Galadriel into a story, he would have to make her behave like the original one.

That is exactly the reason why I write no fan fiction, or use existing characters only very sparingly. It is too hard for me to write an established character exactly the way the original author meant the character to be. Perhaps this is a perfectionist view, but IMO if you can't write an existing character the way he/she is supposed to, don't bother.

[EDIT: the name itself is, I think, less of a problem. I suppose characters can have names like Arwen and Galadriel. Heck, real people even can have and have these names. I know of a girl named Arwen and a boy named Beren. I could easily write and publish stories about them. But if the character I named Arwen is also a beautiful Elven lady, then the similarities will be too great and the laywers could descend on me like vultures.]
__________________
We are not things.

Last edited by Earniel : 04-27-2006 at 02:24 PM.
Earniel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-28-2006, 10:07 AM   #11
Lady Marion Magdalena
Elf Lord
 
Lady Marion Magdalena's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: In a Field of Giant Daisies.
Posts: 821
If you plan on publishing, change either the names or the nature of the characters using the names entirely.
As Earniel said, if you don't and you don't intend to use it as fanfiction, with a disclaimer, then it's outright plagerism and a Very Bad Thing.

If you really, really want to write about Tolkien's characters and you don't mind not being able to get it published then by all means, write. Fanfiction for yourself can be an excellent method of stress relief and of clearing your mind of unoriginal ideas which might be crowdiing out possibilities for original fiction.
__________________
"Because it is my name! Because I cannot have another in my life! Because I lie and sign myself to lies! Because I am not worth the dust on the feet them that hang! How may I live without my name? I have given you my soul; Leave me my name!"

- The Crucible

"nolite hippopotamum vexare!"
Lady Marion Magdalena is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-01-2006, 12:14 PM   #12
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eärniel
I highly doubt you could buy the rights to write and publish Middle-earth themes stories, especially not as a young, starting writer. It not only seems highly improbable to me, I also think it would have been done aaages ago by a lot of people if it was possible.

Changing one letter in a name would probably still be too recognisable and personally -mind you, personally- I think it would be pointless and a little silly to try. To me, it would make me look upon the writer who uses those tactics as someone very dishonest, someone who still tries to rip off a well-known and succesful book and does so badly. Or someone who didn't bother to invest in creating his or her own characters, ergo: a writer who has no heart for writing. In case of fan fiction, like the stories you can find on the net, people will merely assume the writer didn't research properly or reread well enough if there are errors in character-names.

Either way it's bound to make you look bad. Anyway, if you have to resort to these tactics I think you might as well try real, original fiction, which IMO will be much more appreciated by the readers.

IMO another thing about writing with other people's characters is that it is also more difficult because you will have to live up to the reader's idea of that character. Tolkien wrote about Galadriel and now the readers know her. If someone else wrote Galadriel into a story, he would have to make her behave like the original one.

That is exactly the reason why I write no fan fiction, or use existing characters only very sparingly. It is too hard for me to write an established character exactly the way the original author meant the character to be. Perhaps this is a perfectionist view, but IMO if you can't write an existing character the way he/she is supposed to, don't bother.

[EDIT: the name itself is, I think, less of a problem. I suppose characters can have names like Arwen and Galadriel. Heck, real people even can have and have these names. I know of a girl named Arwen and a boy named Beren. I could easily write and publish stories about them. But if the character I named Arwen is also a beautiful Elven lady, then the similarities will be too great and the laywers could descend on me like vultures.]
whew! ok thanks...i think i will change the names then...do you thing i cant strill use elvish though?
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-01-2006, 12:15 PM   #13
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lady Marion Magdalena
If you plan on publishing, change either the names or the nature of the characters using the names entirely.
As Earniel said, if you don't and you don't intend to use it as fanfiction, with a disclaimer, then it's outright plagerism and a Very Bad Thing.

If you really, really want to write about Tolkien's characters and you don't mind not being able to get it published then by all means, write. Fanfiction for yourself can be an excellent method of stress relief and of clearing your mind of unoriginal ideas which might be crowdiing out possibilities for original fiction.
thanks for the tips ...i'll think of entirely oorginal names and cities and stuff...thanks again for all your help...urg the 90 sec rule lol
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-01-2006, 01:24 PM   #14
Earniel
The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator
 
Earniel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium)
Posts: 14,363
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tamuril Sirfalas
whew! ok thanks...i think i will change the names then...do you thing i cant strill use elvish though?
If we're talking here about the Elven languages that Tolkien devised, then it goes the same as with the characters and places: what you didn't create yourself, you are not allowed to use for your own stories that will be published. It doesn't mean you can't create your own Elvish language, though. But those that Tolkien made are naturally off-limits.
__________________
We are not things.
Earniel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-03-2006, 12:18 PM   #15
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eärniel
If we're talking here about the Elven languages that Tolkien devised, then it goes the same as with the characters and places: what you didn't create yourself, you are not allowed to use for your own stories that will be published. It doesn't mean you can't create your own Elvish language, though. But those that Tolkien made are naturally off-limits.
ok thankyou...that IS going to help..i better get started..
*shuffles over to desk and starts writing...gets frustrated and somehow bites tongue and emitts a yelp of pain* lol
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-03-2006, 01:47 PM   #16
Earniel
The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator
 
Earniel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium)
Posts: 14,363
Good luck with it.
__________________
We are not things.
Earniel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-04-2006, 01:29 PM   #17
Tamuril Sirfalas
Elven Warrior
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 340
Quote:
Originally Posted by Eärniel
Good luck with it.
thankyou...i hope it will work out...i have a lot to do
a language and names...i better hurry
__________________
Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!

Nin o Chithaeglir, lasto beth daer:
Rimmo nin Bruinen dan in Ulaer!




REST IN PEACE GRANDMA, GREAT AUNT, GREAT UNCLE .....they're gunna fly with the angels now so say goodbye..but i can't. You don't really realize the importance of someone until they are gone
Tamuril Sirfalas is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-04-2006, 02:52 PM   #18
Gwaimir Windgem
Dread Mothy Lord and Halfwitted Apprentice Loremaster
 
Gwaimir Windgem's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Thomas Aquinas College, Santa Paula, CA
Posts: 10,820
Study other languages first, I recommend. Familiarity with at least the basic lay-out of more than one language would help a lot with the construction of one's own language.
__________________
Crux fidelis, inter omnes arbor una nobilis.
Nulla talem silva profert, fronde, flore, germine.
Dulce lignum, dulce clavo, dulce pondus sustinens.

'With a melon?'
- Eric Idle
Gwaimir Windgem is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-04-2006, 11:02 PM   #19
Curubethion
Fenway Ranger, Lord of Red Sox Nation
 
Curubethion's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: College!
Posts: 1,976
As a random comment in the spirit of this thread, there was a character named "Moria" in Robert Jordan's book A Path of Daggers.
__________________
Adventure...betrayal...heroism...
Atharon: where heroes are born.
My wife once said to me—when I'd been writing for ten or fifteen years—that I could always go back to being a nuclear engineer. And I said to her, 'Harriet, would you let someone who quit his job to go write fantasy anywhere near your nuclear reactor? I wouldn't!' (Robert Jordan)
Curubethion is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-05-2006, 12:05 AM   #20
Meriadoc Brandybuck
Magnificent Master of Buckland
 
Meriadoc Brandybuck's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Buckland, U.S.A.
Posts: 1,138
What if someone was writing a story in todays world about a character who is obsessed with Tolkien and his work, and calls his horse Shadowfax, and knows Elvish? Would there be a problem then?
__________________
But it is the way of my people to use light words at such times and say less than they mean. We fear to say to much. It robs us of the right words when a jest is out of place. -Meriadoc Brandybuck

Is there anything I can do that wouldn't inconvenience me?.-Adrian Monk

Hogan: What's a definate factor that we can count on?
Newkirk: We don't know what we're doing.

Do you wanna split a pineapple? -Shawn Spencer
Meriadoc Brandybuck is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply



Posting Rules
You may post new threads
You may post replies
You may post attachments
You may edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
HP Vs. LoTR Pytt Harry Potter 53 01-17-2011 01:33 AM
Blatant LoTR Copy-Cats ItalianLegolas Middle Earth 81 08-13-2010 12:17 AM
LOTR Discussion: Appendices E and F Forkbeard LOTR Discussion Project 11 09-15-2008 06:16 PM
LOTR Discussion: Appendix A, parts 2 and 3 Forkbeard LOTR Discussion Project 12 12-28-2007 07:10 AM
Funny LOTR Insults Haradrim Middle Earth 0 08-22-2004 01:19 AM


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:10 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
(c) 1997-2019, The Tolkien Trail