01-12-2002, 12:09 AM | #1 |
Sapling
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Poem: The Living Trash Can
Here is my first poem. First you must know that Olean is pronounced Oh-Lee-An, no Oh-Leen. The last board I was on there was a little misunderstanding.
There once was a place called Olean And in this place lived a living trash can he was about to pounce on a child when down from the sky fell a can of salsa (mild) He swooped right down and grabbed him hard And threw him into a pool of lard |
01-12-2002, 01:15 AM | #2 |
Enting
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This work isn't published somewhere?
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01-12-2002, 11:30 AM | #3 |
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for once in my life I'm absolutly speechless.
so what exactly was that suposed to be about? |
01-12-2002, 12:53 PM | #4 |
Elven Warrior
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Hey, Tess, I thought you were speechless...
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01-12-2002, 12:56 PM | #5 |
Sapling
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You like my poem? Yay! Then you'll love my other poems. I'll try to post up one about every month or so. I like to take my time making poems.
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01-13-2002, 07:17 PM | #6 |
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Hey Blinky, your about 10 years old correct?
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01-14-2002, 04:27 PM | #7 |
Sapling
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Hey dude, the name's Binky, not Blinky... I hate it when people mess up my name. And I'm 13, in case you want to know.
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01-15-2002, 01:19 PM | #8 |
Enting
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Well, it's disturbingly reassuring to know that these master works of yours take time
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01-15-2002, 03:11 PM | #9 |
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it's just a touch...... ahhhhhhhh..... disgusting.......
still who am I to be pointing a finger and saying anything like "well thats bad poetry" because I'm shure mine is bad aswell. don't go and get mad at me please. I think you have a very creative mined and could do many good poems but....... if I were you I would not use that one as a guide to any other works of your's do you have more? if so I would love to see them. please put them up. |
01-15-2002, 06:13 PM | #10 |
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That was certainly..... uh different. Welcome to the entmoot Binky.
The utterly um confused Sam PS. I'm a writer too. When the mood takes me I write written landscapes.
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01-15-2002, 06:28 PM | #11 |
Elven Warrior
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guys...i thought it was kinda cute...hi binky.
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01-16-2002, 04:28 PM | #12 |
Sapling
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Um... I don't know... It's just the way you typed that... (shudders) Oh well, thanks all, I'm glad you like it. I have many more.
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