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Old 01-18-2006, 05:03 PM   #1
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Help! Sindarin question!

I'm writing a bit of a story, and I need to know the word for Redeemed in Sindarin, for the title. I've looked and looked but I can't seem to find it anywhere. Can anyone help me?
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Old 01-18-2006, 05:21 PM   #2
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i could try to help...i actually am going to learn that language
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Old 01-18-2006, 05:29 PM   #3
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i know a little quenya too but i'll try...i have a book on elvish so next time im on i'll tell you if i have it..PM me if you have anymore questions
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Old 01-19-2006, 12:27 AM   #4
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One source I checked had "lain" as a translation for "freed"...so that could do.
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Old 01-19-2006, 04:35 PM   #5
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Thanks people for replying.


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One source I checked had "lain" as a translation for "freed"...so that could do.
Yeah, it might.. Thanks!

Tamuril: If you know the word in Quenya that could be helpful as well.

Thanks again, guys.
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I've been chasing grace; Grace ain't so easily found
One bad hand can devil a man, chase him and carry him down.
I've got to get out of here, just give me One Good Year!
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Old 01-20-2006, 10:44 AM   #6
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Runando has been used as a word for "redeemer" in Quenya.
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Old 01-21-2006, 12:40 AM   #7
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It would be helpful if you specified exactly what sense you want to use 'redeem' in, as indirect translations are frequently needed with the fragmentary language. If 'free' is what you're looking for then the suggested lain/lein would probably be the best choice, since that's what Tolkien used in 'Leithan, release.'

Going by the literal meaning (purchase again) you would want to use 'Ad' for re/again, but I'm not sure how you would translate 'purchase'. Perhaps 'gar' (hold/have), so 'Garad' maybe.

Given the use of 'runando' in Quenya, I could make a guess that 'redeem' would be something like 'runad,' but that's not terribly polished.
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Old 01-24-2006, 05:04 PM   #8
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It would be helpful if you specified exactly what sense you want to use 'redeem' in...
Ah, yes. Had not thought of that; sorry. I guess what meaning I'm going for is when someone wishes to correct a grevious wrong on their part. To "redeem" themselves, y'know? I've been wracking my brain trying to think of another word that accurately conveys that kind of meaning... Sorry if I'm being difficult here.
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Just give me One Good Year To get my feet back on the ground.
I've been chasing grace; Grace ain't so easily found
One bad hand can devil a man, chase him and carry him down.
I've got to get out of here, just give me One Good Year!
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Old 01-25-2006, 01:14 AM   #9
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So... 'set right,' 'make amends,' might be close to what you're trying to say? Or is it closer to 'restore,' which would go along with the earlier suggestion of 'save,' 'set free?'

For the first, I might use peniatîr 'set right' (from penia 'fix, set' and tîr 'straight, true'). Another possible would be echadmaer 'make good' (from echad 'fashion, make' and maer 'useful, fit, good'), although that would probably apply to objects rather than people.

For the second, one word to look at would be eden, or 'new, begun again,' which could probably serve as a good substitute for 'restore, put back.' In that line of thought you could try echadeden for 'made new,' although I think that's a bit kludgy. Alternate possibilities for 'make new' would be echadwain or echadsein.

Something like Onnad (Onnenad? Adennin?) would translate as 'born again.'

Any of this helping? Being limited to such a small lexicon makes it really hard to express the idea precisely. And not being a philologist, my haphazard guesses aren't really to be trusted.
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I completely recommend this site. If you can't find the word there, ask in the forums. The webmaster is an expert on Sindarin and she'd be happy to help you.
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Old 01-30-2006, 05:04 PM   #11
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Thank you so much, guys. I think I've got enough to work with now. Thank you a lot!
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It's New Years Day, just like the day before;
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Another year's gone by, and I was thinking once again,
How can I take this losing hand and somehow win?

Just give me One Good Year To get my feet back on the ground.
I've been chasing grace; Grace ain't so easily found
One bad hand can devil a man, chase him and carry him down.
I've got to get out of here, just give me One Good Year!
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Old 01-31-2006, 03:05 PM   #12
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so glad the problem is solved!!! i named a poetry book i'll be working on. cant rememeber the elvish but in english its darkesses twilight
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Sounds like it was nice poetry, if a book might be judged by the title. Ever posted any poetry here?
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Another year's gone by, and I was thinking once again,
How can I take this losing hand and somehow win?

Just give me One Good Year To get my feet back on the ground.
I've been chasing grace; Grace ain't so easily found
One bad hand can devil a man, chase him and carry him down.
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Old 02-02-2006, 02:56 PM   #14
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Sounds like it was nice poetry, if a book might be judged by the title. Ever posted any poetry here?
yes i have..its called Angels Lament...you can find it in GM and its in the thread cancer
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Old 02-02-2006, 02:58 PM   #15
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i actually should post more of my poems..i have a LOT LOL
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