01-13-2004, 08:41 PM | #1 |
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poetry
i don't see any poetry threads; are there any else where and i just didn't see them? oh well, here's a poem (not the best but what can i say? i an amature)
On My Pedastel WHile sitting on the Pedastel I've placed myself upon, I happened to glance down one day. I saw the world spiraling away, 'til everything was small and insignificant. "How glad I am," I sneered selfishly, "that I'm not one of those meaningless Creatures below." Suddenly, I heard the echo of my words drift down, and I looked upward. But that was no echo of my voice- it was only the person on the pedastel higher than mine.
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01-13-2004, 08:43 PM | #2 |
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oh duh!!! you post poems singularly... really, i'm not this dense every day, just most of the time...
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01-15-2004, 07:59 PM | #3 |
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That's cute! Neat ending. I didn't expect it and that's why it's cool.
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