my book:The Dragonking's Sword

[Giroth]

hey,i'm writing a book right now called "The Dragonking's Sword".

it's book one in the trilogy,and is so far 332 pages long.

It has a lot of history(a lot needs to be cleaned up in the second draft though)
and Giroth is the dragonking,BTW.

To put it real short,the book's about an elf with a mysterious past who is the only one that
can release the once evil dragonking,Giroth,from his sword prison at the Wizard Tower,in order to control the dragonking and destroy the Gryhir Dragon(gryhir dragons can morph in form),Serira.This gryhir dragon is threatening to destroy the land of Balorn with his magic,and has captured the last dragon guardians of balorn in order to use them against the kingdom,also releasing the many beasts from the unknown land into balorn,where the dragons once prevented from happening.


also,Serira was the enemy of Giroth long ago,and Giroth was the enemy of balorn long before that, where he destroyed the kingdoms for sport until the wizards of the Wizard Tower concealed him in a magic sword to stop him(he couldn't be killed)and then later control him at will to help balorn.


Serira killed all the wizards of the tower,thus preventing the release of Giroth anymore against him because only the wizards had the power to do so.


But the elf had the ability,for an unknown reason..........



It has a lot of characters,creatures,history,and a language too.Not all fixed up yet, not even close,but it's going well

Any advice?


~Giroth