Love poem.

Blackboar · 02-08-2003, 11:21 AM

K, this is partly for fun, and partly to help me to think up a love poem for my boyfriend!

You the first line of the song, then the next person will do the next line, you see. Try to make it a serious line, not a funny one.

Sminty_Smeagol · 02-08-2003, 11:26 AM

Roses are red..... jp lol

FrodoFriend · 02-08-2003, 11:40 AM

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
It's gotta be said,
I like Frodo better than you!

Legolas_Frodo_Aragorn · 02-08-2003, 03:31 PM

uh......im not very good at love poems...but depressed poems...ask away!

Lalaith_Elf · 02-08-2003, 04:14 PM

um......... give me a while to think

Lizra · 02-08-2003, 07:03 PM

You're on my mind, both night and day,
I really shouldn't tell.
I think about your eyes, your mouth,
the lucious way you smell.

My love for you encites desire,
your presence makes me glow,
come be with me, and take me higher,
the rest will never know.

Whatever!

Sminty_Smeagol · 02-08-2003, 07:14 PM

hun that's not love. That's lust. Sorry to burst your bubble.
VALENTINES DAY IS WICKED!! IT IS NOT ABOUT LOVE!! IT IS ABOUT LUST AND INFATUATION! CURSE IT!

Lizra · 02-08-2003, 07:19 PM

Love and lust come together! Was this supposed to be a poem to a boyfriend or your mommy!

How old are you guys anyway! Something tells me you're younger than I realize! Nevermind! I just thought of my husband and the words came easy.

We been married 20 years, I think that qualifies as "love"! (and certainly lust too!)

Sminty_Smeagol · 02-08-2003, 07:24 PM

maybe my boyfriend IS my mommy!

Sorry. a random Cody thought.

Lizra · 02-08-2003, 07:25 PM

Well, maybe! Mommy's are wonderful!

Sminty_Smeagol · 02-08-2003, 07:28 PM

I am 14 years old. WOOHOO. I have like 4 more years to go until I can get married and have sex. I'll probably never end up getting married though. You know what I think is so stupid???

Okay you know how christians (which I happen to be) aren't supposed to have pre-marital sex and stuff? Well, it is so much harder now, from when they wrote that law; 'cuz back then they got married when they were 14 and started puberty at like 17, and now we get married in our 20's and reach puberty at like 12. So we have 10 years of sexual tension, and back then they wouldnt even get horny until 3 years into their marriage.

THAT IS SO EVIL.

Lizra · 02-08-2003, 07:34 PM

yes! no wonder some teens are so "cranky"!

Sminty_Smeagol · 02-08-2003, 07:36 PM

hehehe sorry just had to get that out of my system.

ArwenEvenstar · 02-08-2003, 09:34 PM

thats sooo true!

try this

Roses are red
Violents are blue
You may not know it,
But I love you!

I got it out of a book, but I highly doubt that ur bf will be reading the princess diaries, lol

Sminty_Smeagol · 02-08-2003, 09:47 PM

HAHahAHa here is a display of sminty's wonderful writing!
Roses are violet
Bagels are blue
I don't like the tacoes
But I do like rabid sheep that try to attack me.
WEEEE!

ArwenEvenstar · 02-08-2003, 10:06 PM

lol go sminty! bravo encore

dont bother with a poem just give them a big hug and/or kiss and tell him u love him! that's what im doing

WiseWizard · 02-09-2003, 02:40 AM

Agreed. I used to think that love poems would save my relationship, but the most important part is letting them know you love them 1)in your own words and 2) to their face. A silly love poem (and one written by other people especially) really isn't needed to show your love for this person. Personally I'd much rather receive a big hug and/or kiss and the simple words of "I love you" rather than a love poem.

Lizra · 02-09-2003, 02:54 AM

hmmmpt! I think my "love poem" is pretty hot!

It could make a "grown" man melt!

Especially if you look at him like you really, really, really mean it!

I guess I CAN"T keep the lust out of love!

Mmmmnnnn! Why wait for valentines day!

Lust leads to love....er, love leads to lust......love, lust....

I'll figure it out someday!

WiseWizard · 02-09-2003, 04:24 AM

Whoa there Ms. Rabbit. I'll just take your word for it, and please don't try to ocnvince me. And please remember there are people younger than the both of us on the moot.
As for love and lust.....I think that lust will always be a factor, but in some cases it won't rule as the major factor. It'll still be there, but the love will be more prominent.

Elf.Freak · 02-09-2003, 05:17 AM

isn't this kinda going off topic?

i'm not looking forward to valentines day, eeevviill...

02-08-2003, 11:21 AM	#1
Blackboar Legolas's beloved sister and Queen of the Wood Elves of Mirkwood Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Under the hill at Bag-end, Hobbiton the Shire Or Rivendell,I can't remember!!!!!!!!!! Posts: 1,086	Love poem. K, this is partly for fun, and partly to help me to think up a love poem for my boyfriend! You the first line of the song, then the next person will do the next line, you see. Try to make it a serious line, not a funny one.

02-08-2003, 11:26 AM	#2
Sminty_Smeagol Manic Cardboard-Box Dweller Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: In a house Posts: 1,071	Roses are red..... jp lol __________________ I love the fishes.

02-08-2003, 11:40 AM	#3
FrodoFriend Halfwitted Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Eryn Vorn Posts: 1,659	Roses are red, Violets are blue, It's gotta be said, I like Frodo better than you! __________________ Fingolfin lives! ... in my finger! The Crossroads of Arda - Warning. Halfwit content. Not appropriate for people with IQ of over 18. The Fellowship of the Message Board Nyáréonié - The Tale of Tears

02-08-2003, 03:31 PM	#4
Legolas_Frodo_Aragorn The Elven Queen Of All Pyros Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Im like a little bug stuck in the lamp...never going anywhere Posts: 795	uh......im not very good at love poems...but depressed poems...ask away! __________________ Would you judge my future based on what i did in the past? Procrastinators Unite!!!.....tomorrrow.... Kids in backseats cause accidents...accidents in backseats cause kids As long as there are tests..there will be prayers in school

02-08-2003, 04:14 PM	#5
Lalaith_Elf Her Infernal Majesty Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 2,188	um......... give me a while to think __________________ "It is a good viewpoint to see the world as a dream. When you have something like a nightmare, you will wake up and tell yourself that it was only a dream. It is said that the world we live in is not a bit different from this." - Yamamoto Tsunetomo

02-08-2003, 07:03 PM	#6
Lizra Domesticated Swing Babe Join Date: May 2002 Location: Reality Posts: 5,340	You're on my mind, both night and day, I really shouldn't tell. I think about your eyes, your mouth, the lucious way you smell. My love for you encites desire, your presence makes me glow, come be with me, and take me higher, the rest will never know. Whatever! __________________ Happy Atheist Go Democrats!

02-08-2003, 07:14 PM	#7
Sminty_Smeagol Manic Cardboard-Box Dweller Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: In a house Posts: 1,071	hun that's not love. That's lust. Sorry to burst your bubble. VALENTINES DAY IS WICKED!! IT IS NOT ABOUT LOVE!! IT IS ABOUT LUST AND INFATUATION! CURSE IT! __________________ I love the fishes.

02-08-2003, 07:19 PM	#8
Lizra Domesticated Swing Babe Join Date: May 2002 Location: Reality Posts: 5,340	Love and lust come together! Was this supposed to be a poem to a boyfriend or your mommy! How old are you guys anyway! Something tells me you're younger than I realize! Nevermind! I just thought of my husband and the words came easy. We been married 20 years, I think that qualifies as "love"! (and certainly lust too!) __________________ Happy Atheist Go Democrats! Last edited by Lizra : 02-08-2003 at 07:25 PM.

02-08-2003, 07:24 PM	#9
Sminty_Smeagol Manic Cardboard-Box Dweller Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: In a house Posts: 1,071	maybe my boyfriend IS my mommy! Sorry. a random Cody thought. __________________ I love the fishes.

02-08-2003, 07:25 PM	#10
Lizra Domesticated Swing Babe Join Date: May 2002 Location: Reality Posts: 5,340	Well, maybe! Mommy's are wonderful! __________________ Happy Atheist Go Democrats!

02-08-2003, 07:28 PM	#11
Sminty_Smeagol Manic Cardboard-Box Dweller Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: In a house Posts: 1,071	I am 14 years old. WOOHOO. I have like 4 more years to go until I can get married and have sex. I'll probably never end up getting married though. You know what I think is so stupid??? Okay you know how christians (which I happen to be) aren't supposed to have pre-marital sex and stuff? Well, it is so much harder now, from when they wrote that law; 'cuz back then they got married when they were 14 and started puberty at like 17, and now we get married in our 20's and reach puberty at like 12. So we have 10 years of sexual tension, and back then they wouldnt even get horny until 3 years into their marriage. THAT IS SO EVIL. __________________ I love the fishes.

02-08-2003, 07:34 PM	#12
Lizra Domesticated Swing Babe Join Date: May 2002 Location: Reality Posts: 5,340	yes! no wonder some teens are so "cranky"! __________________ Happy Atheist Go Democrats!

02-08-2003, 07:36 PM	#13
Sminty_Smeagol Manic Cardboard-Box Dweller Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: In a house Posts: 1,071	hehehe sorry just had to get that out of my system. __________________ I love the fishes.

02-08-2003, 09:34 PM	#14
ArwenEvenstar Elf Lord Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: and why do YOU want to know? Posts: 685	lol at sminty thats sooo true! try this Roses are red Violents are blue You may not know it, But I love you! I got it out of a book, but I highly doubt that ur bf will be reading the princess diaries, lol __________________ The only thing active about me is my imagination!

02-08-2003, 09:47 PM	#15
Sminty_Smeagol Manic Cardboard-Box Dweller Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: In a house Posts: 1,071	HAHahAHa here is a display of sminty's wonderful writing! Roses are violet Bagels are blue I don't like the tacoes But I do like rabid sheep that try to attack me. WEEEE! __________________ I love the fishes.

02-08-2003, 10:06 PM	#16
ArwenEvenstar Elf Lord Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: and why do YOU want to know? Posts: 685	lol go sminty! bravo encore dont bother with a poem just give them a big hug and/or kiss and tell him u love him! that's what im doing __________________ The only thing active about me is my imagination!

02-09-2003, 02:40 AM	#17
WiseWizard Elven Warrior Join Date: May 2002 Location: the darkest region of Mirkwood (and trust me, it's really dark) Posts: 331	Agreed. I used to think that love poems would save my relationship, but the most important part is letting them know you love them 1)in your own words and 2) to their face. A silly love poem (and one written by other people especially) really isn't needed to show your love for this person. Personally I'd much rather receive a big hug and/or kiss and the simple words of "I love you" rather than a love poem. __________________ My motto: Heaven doesn't want me and hell's afraid I'll take over. ------------------------------------------------ "Upstage me and I'll crush your kneecaps!" ------------------------------------------------ "It's been a while since I've been 130." -Aaron Reichgott ------------------------------------------------ You know, the world's full of apathy...but I don't care. ------------------------------------------------ "I would've honked, but I might have hit you." -Janaki ------------------------------------------------ "If it weren't for my horse, I wouldn't have gone to college that year." -Lewis Black ------------------------------------------------ "I have one speed which varies according to my mood." -Kristy Pihl ------------------------------------------------ "When I get a fever, I can hear my mom's voice in my head. But she's alive, not dead, so it's not as exciting." -Anna Crandall ------------------------------------------------ "It doesn't matter what your body type is, as long as you're bloodthirsty." -Rachel Carlson ------------------------------------------------- "My mind is a whirling miasma." -Jeff E. ------------------------------------------------- "I think earth is the Alabama of the universe and we don't even know it." ------------------------------------------------- "You can't just apologize the laziness of my bunnies away." -Taylor S.B. ------------------------------------------------- I'm a sadistic massochist. I'm always happy.

02-09-2003, 02:54 AM	#18
Lizra Domesticated Swing Babe Join Date: May 2002 Location: Reality Posts: 5,340	hmmmpt! I think my "love poem" is pretty hot! It could make a "grown" man melt! Especially if you look at him like you really, really, really mean it! I guess I CAN"T keep the lust out of love! Mmmmnnnn! Why wait for valentines day! Lust leads to love....er, love leads to lust......love, lust.... I'll figure it out someday! __________________ Happy Atheist Go Democrats! Last edited by Lizra : 02-09-2003 at 03:01 AM.

02-09-2003, 04:24 AM	#19
WiseWizard Elven Warrior Join Date: May 2002 Location: the darkest region of Mirkwood (and trust me, it's really dark) Posts: 331	Whoa there Ms. Rabbit. I'll just take your word for it, and please don't try to ocnvince me. And please remember there are people younger than the both of us on the moot. As for love and lust.....I think that lust will always be a factor, but in some cases it won't rule as the major factor. It'll still be there, but the love will be more prominent. __________________ My motto: Heaven doesn't want me and hell's afraid I'll take over. ------------------------------------------------ "Upstage me and I'll crush your kneecaps!" ------------------------------------------------ "It's been a while since I've been 130." -Aaron Reichgott ------------------------------------------------ You know, the world's full of apathy...but I don't care. ------------------------------------------------ "I would've honked, but I might have hit you." -Janaki ------------------------------------------------ "If it weren't for my horse, I wouldn't have gone to college that year." -Lewis Black ------------------------------------------------ "I have one speed which varies according to my mood." -Kristy Pihl ------------------------------------------------ "When I get a fever, I can hear my mom's voice in my head. But she's alive, not dead, so it's not as exciting." -Anna Crandall ------------------------------------------------ "It doesn't matter what your body type is, as long as you're bloodthirsty." -Rachel Carlson ------------------------------------------------- "My mind is a whirling miasma." -Jeff E. ------------------------------------------------- "I think earth is the Alabama of the universe and we don't even know it." ------------------------------------------------- "You can't just apologize the laziness of my bunnies away." -Taylor S.B. ------------------------------------------------- I'm a sadistic massochist. I'm always happy.

02-09-2003, 05:17 AM	#20
Elf.Freak Orli's lil fan Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sugar World/Orlando Bloom Cloud Posts: 464	isn't this kinda going off topic? i'm not looking forward to valentines day, eeevviill... __________________ >>--elven arrow--> ~ Give a man a fish and he'll feed for a day, give me a fish and you'll only get it back! ~ I've gotta new avatar! looks kinda like me...anime style! ~ LOST: Orlando Bloom. If found, please send him straight to Elf.Freak

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