10-11-2007, 08:04 PM | #1 | |
Hobbit
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The Tale of Arhdfaes
Chapter 1 Arhdfaes (Pronouciation: Aard-Fae-Us) slowly opened his eyes. He gazed up at the ceiling of his small apartment, there was a large painting depicting the fall of Lol-Longas to the forces of Darkness. Arhdfaes had commissioned the Hal-Faldoer's most distinguished artist to paint the striking piece of art, depicting the hordes of Darkness breaking through the last defences, the remains of the wall and gate and the protection spell. It also depicted the death of Neolnostar, the last king of the House of Tronostar of Los-Longas. He had been upon his horse directing the head Wizards as they tried to hold the protection spell over the city. An arrow had come soaring towards him, and before he could cast a deflection spell the arrow made a mortal wound to his temple, and with his head bloodied he fell off his steed, causing the Wizards to lose all hope and to save themselves and whichever defenders were around them by casting a teleportation spell. With the last of the protection spell gone the Trolls, Goblins, Dark Elves and Men, and their leader Gol-Gorathadum (Pronounciation: Gole-Gore-Aa-Thad-Oom) took the city without much resistance, a survivor's account had managed to survive the ages:Quote:
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10-13-2007, 10:36 AM | #2 | |
Hobbit
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Chapter 2 Arhdfaes walked down from his apartment and took the stairway that wrapped itself around one of the many tall and old trees in the city, and he stepped down onto one of the stone pathways that led around the city of Tol-Trainte (place of haven), he made it toward the halls of Folinwe, and he entered its atmosphere. The room was dark but there floating lights in the room that looked like the stars. Arhdfaes stopped and hesitated. He was having another flashback... Quote:
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