12-03-2001, 11:15 AM | #1 |
Elven Warrior
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Criticism please ^^
Here's a pencil drawing i just did. I'd like to know what you all think.
Thankyou!
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12-03-2001, 11:57 AM | #2 |
Elven Warrior
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Ooo! Ooh! I LIKE IT!
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12-03-2001, 12:07 PM | #3 |
Queen of Nargothrond
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I assume this is a female? It's cute, but the ears are too big.
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12-03-2001, 02:29 PM | #4 |
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It’s quite good, but I would like it even more if her ears were shorter (making her more like tolkien’s elves).
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12-03-2001, 04:49 PM | #5 |
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The ears are really WAY too big.
the eyes are a bit large... but you can leave them that way. And the head isn't really a very natural shape. I mean... it's too rounded, and the chin is too small. But hey, all I can do is inanimate objects with particle effects. IT's nice, overall. In a sort of anime, not anywhere close to being realistic, way.
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12-03-2001, 05:53 PM | #6 |
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Yea, I agree it´s a nice pic.
But honestly, the ears ARE a bit K-9, don´t you agree?
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12-03-2001, 06:38 PM | #7 |
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i noticed the ears when i scanned it. honestly, those things add ten pounds!
This is a new style for me, and i try notto do the tiny tolkien ears. i strive to be original. however, i agree on the overboardness. As for the big eyes well, i love 'em big ^.^ and i normally do anime anyway. BUt i'll work on that! thanks!!! you guys are so sweet!
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12-03-2001, 07:50 PM | #8 |
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If you really want to be original, you can give the Elf-woman round ears
Always trying to impress his ideas on others,
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12-03-2001, 11:08 PM | #9 |
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Not bad... would you be interested in having it put up at the Tolkien Trail?
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12-04-2001, 12:41 PM | #10 |
Elven Warrior
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That's not tolkien-elf, but that's a very nice anime-elf!
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12-14-2001, 02:27 AM | #11 |
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Elf Pic
She's very pretty. Her eyes are wonderful. The ears? Well, if that is how you see an elf then that is how her ears should be to you. As for me....maybe I see them a little smaller or mayber her hair would fall differently. But, the eyes....I really liked the eyes. Post more pics.
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12-17-2001, 04:47 AM | #12 |
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Art
It's a little to "anime" to be an elf, but other than that it's very good (minus the ears )
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12-19-2001, 11:22 AM | #13 |
Elven Warrior
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what do you mean to "anime" to be an elf????
Ever hear of loddoss wars......it stars an elf. In fact, it's from there that i adopted my anime elf style. wow, that sound's like stolen...but deedlit's ears are soooo pretty! ^^; BTW, there's a nother pic i have scanned, but i won't post it here. Now, all imaturity aside, it's a fae and she has no clothes. it's tasteful but i know that some ppl wouldn't want it on here. so PM me. thankyou! you guys are so great!
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12-20-2001, 05:13 AM | #14 |
Elven Warrior
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That's right. There are tons of elves in anime and they are all beautiful. I happen to like anime style drawing. Too bad I couldn't draw to save my life.
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12-20-2001, 01:39 PM | #15 |
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The Pic isnt bad i guess if your into that type of thing i guess ^.^
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