06-24-2004, 04:38 PM | #1 |
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A song I wrote
Confidence (I’ll carry on)
by Xenoia There was once a time, people were free Young and didn’t know the way it was going to be Living, that’s just a game, and everyone plays it, just the same. I still remember the way I cried The first time you hurt me, deeply, you lied You were just like me, but stronger And the first cut ached for longer chorus I always tried so hard - too hard To work my way in from the edge But one too many bruises changed me Ripped my confidence away But I’ll carry on anyway You’ll see I loved someone today, I thought it was you But I never knew how cruel…you f****d me through And your love cut me deepest, bleeding my regret You made a hole in my heart and I’ll never forget. chorus Time is a healer, that’s what they say It’s not, I learned, I learned the hardest way People are too harsh; they don’t know the wounds they leave Or see the gaping scars that cross my soul – they won’t heal. There’s always someone better, prettier, smarter, stronger Don’t tell me that again – I let you in once, now I’m writing this song Look at me and see me secure…closer, you’re wrong. chorus But even though I know now Life is still just a game And I’ll carry on anyway Just watch me. I wrote this today and think it expresses some things I've felt for a while now. Or perhaps it doesn't, and just avoids saying them. Still I thought I'd see what people thought, if anything at all.
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06-26-2004, 01:08 PM | #2 |
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I liked it. Have you set it to music yet?
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06-26-2004, 02:09 PM | #3 |
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no, not yet. I'm not vry good at composing. I am trying to write a piano part to go with it, but in the end may have to give up.
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