09-06-2007, 08:39 PM | #1 |
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I'm going to remind you from the start this is a work in progress. I'd like to hear your feedback on this
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09-12-2007, 08:29 AM | #2 |
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Whoa.... I dont really know what's going on, but that's good
This looks pretty good, I wasnt going to post until you extended the story a little bit, but I went ahead and did anyway. I really am curious about Ryman, and the queen also has me asking questions. Please keep writing!
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09-12-2007, 05:22 PM | #3 |
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Thanks, Nautipus. This is acually the first story I wrote in my current style. Hopefully, it'll be better than Dragonmaiden.
I'll give warning now. Later posts in this story will contain some language
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09-12-2007, 10:03 PM | #4 |
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Well, so far your current style has me hooked.
These story seems to be moving at an almost frenzied pace, and under normal circumstances I would say slow down, but it flows so well right now that it would be unnecessary. Thanks for the warning, by the way.
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09-16-2007, 04:29 PM | #5 |
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You're welcome. Sorry about just now getting a new post in. Been working double shifts at work.
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09-17-2007, 12:31 PM | #6 |
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I might not get another post in until maybe next wed or thursday
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09-17-2007, 02:47 PM | #7 |
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Once again, thanks for the update.
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09-18-2007, 09:29 PM | #8 |
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That queen is getting feisty, but rightly so. Ryman seems like a forward, inconsiderate jerk. she shoulda kicked him in the n**s. jerk
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09-18-2007, 11:51 PM | #9 |
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Fight! Fight! Fight!
Are Claudious and Ryman gonna square off? Cause if they are, I'm personally cheering for Ryman (Sorry, Nautipus, man, some people drink coke, ya know?) . I seriously enjoy his character. He seems to be the misfit of the trio, which kinda earns my pity, while at the same time his most recent interractions with the queen have been (for me) quite hilarious, which automatically makes him fun to read about. Funny characters like him add a little something to a story, you know? Like seasoning. Only, it makes you laugh instead of say "Mmmm!" My stories could use more of those. It'd be a HUGE twist if he turned out to be the bad dude. . . . I hope that doesn't happen, though. |
09-19-2007, 04:40 PM | #10 |
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This is funny. I have gotten two different responses to Ryman
I was able to sneak some time in today for a post. Enjoy
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09-19-2007, 05:35 PM | #11 |
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Like I said before, the fast pace of this story works very well. But you must tell me, who the h*** is Endura?(!) That's for your benefit, Tuinor.
It was kind of sad about Ryman's son though And Claudious Acalewia, quit it!!!! Keep up the good work.
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09-19-2007, 06:47 PM | #12 |
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. . . I'm never, ever suggesting plot twists to you again!
Just kidding 'bout that. You probably planned this from the beginning. I've kinda got a knack for guessing at plots. I feel sorry for Ryman; having his son murdered in front of him. I didn't see that one coming. I hope he doesn't die, though if he ever meets the queen again, he probably will. Still, I would like to see him get some chance at redemption (and, possibly, revenge ) |
09-20-2007, 11:27 AM | #13 | |
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09-20-2007, 11:30 AM | #14 |
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Dont you toy with me, dont you do it!
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09-20-2007, 11:33 AM | #15 |
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what are the chances of getting hit with the Rule twice in a row?
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09-20-2007, 11:41 AM | #16 |
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I think it depends on who you are and how your day's going...but that's just a guess.
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09-22-2007, 12:21 PM | #17 |
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Hahaha
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09-25-2007, 04:56 PM | #18 |
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That's RIGHT, hahaha
There oughta be ROFLMAO thrown in there for good measure!
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09-26-2007, 06:57 PM | #19 |
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Roflmao
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09-26-2007, 07:26 PM | #20 |
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ThankYOU!
Yay Claudious!!! This last post made me so happy that I started giggling, then I saw your little comment on the discussion for sky blue and tried to hold it in. *snorts with gleeful joy and good ol' comic license* Well, that's good enough. Great story so far, I hope we learn more about Endura though... I have an idea of what Endura might be.... but I'll keep it to myself.
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