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Old 05-19-2008, 06:26 AM   #161
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D_r_n_s_/a_d/_l_o_/!/W_e_/w_/c_u_d/_o_e/_g_i_/w_/c_m_/t_/t_e/_o_s_/.
T_e_e/_e/_o_n_/t_e/_i_g/_l_i_/a_/t_e/_o_r/./_i_/h_a_/w_s/_r_s_e_/a_/w_t_/
a/_r_a_/m_c_/o_/i_o_/./W_/f_u_d/_o/_t_e_s/:/_l_/h_d/_l_d/,/_n_/h_/h_d/_t_o_/
a_o_e/,/_e_i_n_/./T_a_/i_/p_a_n/;/_o_/h_s/_w_r_/l_y/_e_i_e/_i_/,/t_i_t_d/_n_/
u_t_m_e_e_/a_/i_/b_/l_g_t_i_g/-/_t_o_e/./_l_/t_e/_o_s_/w_s/_r_k_n/_n_/r_v_g_d/.
_a_g_t/_s/_e_t/./_h_/t_e_s_r_e_/a_e/_m_t_/./T_e/_h_m_e_/o_/i_o_/i_/t_r_/a_a_t/.
_h_/S_l_a_i_s/_r_/t_k_n/!/
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Old 05-19-2008, 07:04 AM   #162
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It's about Finwe, I think, though I'm not quite sure where from. A partial attempt:

Darkness and /_l_o_/!/When we could/_o_e/again we came to the/_o_s_/.
There we found the king slain at/the/ door/./_i_/h_a_/w_s/_r_s_e_/a_/w_t_/
a/_r_a_/m_c_/o_/i_o_/./We found no others, all had fled/,/and he had stood alone/,/_e_i_n_/./ That is plain/;/for his sword lay beside him, /t_i_t_d/_n_/
u_t_m_e_e_/a_/i_/b_/lightning/-/_t_o_e/./All the house was broken/and ravaged/. _a_g_t/_s/_e_t/./_h_/t_e_s_r_e_/a_e/_m_t_/./T_e/_h_m_e_/o_/i_o_/i_/t_r_/a_a_t/.
The Silmarils are taken!
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Old 05-19-2008, 07:25 AM   #163
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Darkness and /_l_o_/!/When we could come again we came to the house.
There we found the king slain at the door. His head was /_r_s_e_/ as with
a /_r_a_/m_c_/o_/i_o_/. We found no others, all had fled, and he had stood alone,
/_e_i_n_/. That is plain; for his sword lay beside him, twisted and
/u_t_m_e_e_/ as if by lightning-stroke. All the house was broken and ravaged. _a_g_t/ as /_e_t/./_h_/t_e_s_r_e_/a_e/_m_t_/./T_e/_h_m_e_/o_/i_o_/i_/t_r_/a_a_t/.
The Silmarils are taken!
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Old 05-19-2008, 07:48 AM   #164
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Good job, everyone.

'come' is wrong in the first line
and the second 'as' is wrong in the fifth line.
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Old 05-19-2008, 08:04 AM   #165
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Darkness and blood! When we could move again we came to the house.
There we found the king slain at the door. His head was crushed as with
a great mace of iron. We found no others, all had fled, and he had stood alone,
defiant. That is plain; for his sword lay beside him, twisted and
/u_t_m_e_e_/ as if by lightning-stroke. All the house was broken and ravaged.
_a_g_t/ is /_e_t/./The/t_e_s_r_e_/are empty. The /_h_m_e_/o_/i_o_/is /t_r_/a_a_t/.
The Silmarils are taken!
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Old 05-19-2008, 08:40 AM   #166
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untempered, naught, left, treasuries, ____ , of iron is torn apart.
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Old 05-19-2008, 08:49 AM   #167
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Everything is right, as are DPR's additions. One word and the speaker left.
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Old 05-19-2008, 09:18 AM   #168
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Maedhros?
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Old 05-19-2008, 09:24 AM   #169
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Yep. One word left. And you probably know it and are just skipping it so you don't have to do the next puzzle.
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Old 05-20-2008, 09:22 AM   #170
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That's been known to happen but not this time... Chimney?
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Old 05-20-2008, 12:01 PM   #171
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Nope. Try again.
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Old 05-20-2008, 01:00 PM   #172
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Shoot. I got it. Chamber.
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Old 05-22-2008, 08:29 AM   #173
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Yep!
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Old 05-22-2008, 02:08 PM   #174
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M_l_o/_a_h/_e_i_e_/u_d_e/_e_t_/,/
a_d/_i_e_/w_t_o_t/_e_t_a_n_/,/a_d/_e_/h_t_/n_t/_r_e_/u_/t_y/_e_i_e/
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a_d/_h_/m_g_c/_h_t/_w_l_s/_n/_i_t/_n_/v_p_u_s/;/
_i_t_n/_o/_h_/w_i_p_r/_f/_a_n_/u_o_/t_e/_a_t_/./
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Old 05-22-2008, 02:55 PM   #175
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Melko hath/_e_i_e_/u_d_e/_e_t_/, and/_i_e_/ without/_e_t_a_n_/, and yet hath not/_r_e_/u_/thy/_e_i_e/ now utterly /_u_l_e_/the/_u_i_/of thy/_e_s/. _a_h_r/_e_o_d/_o_/t_e/_e_g_t/and glory of the c_o_d_/and the magic that swells in/_i_t/_n_/v_p_u_s/; _i_t_n/_o/the whisper of/_a_n_/upon the/_a_t_/.
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'now' and 'swells' are incorrect. The rest looks good.
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"...glory of the clouds and the magic that dwells in mist and vapours;..."

Last word "earth"?
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Old 05-23-2008, 09:33 AM   #178
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Very good. All correct.
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Melko hath/devised/undue/death/, and/fires/ without/_e_t_a_n_/, and yet hath not/_r_e_/up/thy/_e_i_e/ nor utterly /quelled/the/quiet/of thy/seas/. _a_h_r/_e_o_d/nor/the/height/and glory of the clouds/and the magic that dwells in/mist/and/vapours/; listen/to/the whisper of/rain]/upon the/earth/.

And it's Eru...
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