I made a song!!!!! - Page 35

Eruviel Greenleaf · 05-13-2002, 02:46 AM

Hey, Elfmaster, would you mind if I did another version of Candle in the Wind? I mean, yours was terrific, but I was suddenly inspired to mangle it about someone else. . .but of course I'll only do it if it's okay with you.

Elfmaster XK · 05-13-2002, 05:36 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Eruviel Greenleaf
Hey, Elfmaster, would you mind if I did another version of Candle in the Wind? I mean, yours was terrific, but I was suddenly inspired to mangle it about someone else. . .but of course I'll only do it if it's okay with you.

Why of course you can! I don't mind.

I did Goodbye yellow brick road for ya...

Goodbye Yellow Brick Road - Elton John
Goodbye Beautiful Shire - E XK

I'm sorry you can't come with me
On this final journey, Sam
You say i should stay in the Shire
Should listen to my old Sam

You know i can't live forever
On my own, or with you
I've got to do this one alone
You can't be constantly torn in two

Ah, Ah,
So goodbye beautiful Shire
Where the good hobbit people live
I'll miss you my beautiful home
And i'll miss you all too
Going over the sea, into the West
Your persistance to follow i admire
But i've finally decided my future lies
Beyond the Beautiful Shire
Ah, Ah.

What will i do without you?
My faithful friend, Sam
You've got Rosie now, and your little kid
On the way, you don't need me Sam

In your heart you know why i go
It hurts me to stay
From a long carried burden
You've helped me on the way, let me go.

Ah, Ah,
So goodbye beautiful Shire
Where the good hobbit people live
I'll miss you my beautiful home
And i'll miss you all too
Going over the sea, into the West
Thank you for all that you've done Sam, my dear,
Your future Sam, lies right here]
Goodbye Beautiful Shire
Ah, Ah.

Eruviel Greenleaf · 05-13-2002, 05:40 AM

Thank you, for the song, and the permission to mangle Candle in the Wind again.

Here, have some wine.

Elfmaster XK · 05-13-2002, 05:58 AM

Thanks matey! Arr, would i ever decline
An offer from ye, of wine
Go magle friend, mangle i say
Arr, the sea be rough today -hic - hic - *smiles at blurry world full of mangled songs*

Eruviel Greenleaf · 05-13-2002, 06:01 AM

Aye, off to mangle, then, ere the sky turns light in the east! Arr!

*realizes the paper due today still isn't done* I'll mangle it some other time, eh? Like tomorrow.

Elfmaster XK · 05-13-2002, 06:06 AM

Paper to do eh? I have just had an hour exam. I'm off for study leave now and next exam is on thursday, so i have time, time to be free and mangle and go to the pub and sing and shout 'PRAISE THE LORD for the question on the paper was one i had revised for!'

I am contented. Good luck with your papewr cap'n, i wish i could help you.

Eruviel Greenleaf · 05-13-2002, 06:13 AM

Thank you E XK *hic* Good luck on your exam! And I hope your last one went well...here, have some vodka, to celebrate being done with that one.

*enjoys not having exams to worry about. remembers the papers. panics. writes a song entitled, The Ballad of Eruviel's senior thesis.*

Oh it was insanely early on monday morning,
and the paper, it still was not done. . .

Elfmaster XK · 05-13-2002, 06:19 AM

*Takes vodka*

Celebrate good times, come on... *sings into distance, dancing with the drunk elf cap'n all the way to the pub. Eruviel panics again for, alas, the paper is still not done!*

Eruviel Greenleaf · 05-13-2002, 06:21 AM

*but she continues dancing with the Alcoholic First Mate all the way to the pub, because she's sure a few pints will help the paper*

Arathorn · 05-14-2002, 06:23 AM

Sailing On An Elf Ship
(Originally LEAVING ON A JETPLANE by John Denver)

All my pipes are packed I'm ready to row
I'm marching here towards the shore
I hate to break your sup to say goodbye
But the Age is breakin' these next few morns
Cirdan is waitin' he's callin' me on
I hope you won't be lonesome please don't cry

Kiss Rosie, Sam, smile for me
Tell me that you'll follow me
Love her like you've never loved before
Cause I'm sailing on an elf ship
Don't think that I'll be back again
But Sam my wounds hurt so

There's so many times I've pushed you down
Those many climbs We've sneaked around
I tell you now that you've helped bring that ring
Every Isle I go I'll think of you
Every ring I smoke I'll smoke for you
When you come forth I wish we then can sing

Kiss Rosie, Sam, smile for me
Tell me that you'll follow me
Love her like you've never loved before
Cause I'm sailing on an elf ship
Don't think that I'll be back again
But Sam my wounds hurt so

Now the time has come to leave you
One more time let me hug you
Gandalf calls, I'll be on my way
Dream about your kids, young dad
Fair Elanor and Frodo-Lad
Young Rosie-Lass, and Merry, come what may...

Kiss Rosie, Sam, smile for me
Tell me that you'll follow me
Love her like you've never loved before
Cause I'm sailing on an elf ship
Don't think that I'll be back again
But Sam my wounds hurt so

Sailing on an elf ship
Sailing on an elf ship

StrawberryIcecream · 05-14-2002, 11:31 AM

*pasees eowny tissues*

i have a feeling she'll need them. thats a very sentimental song to her!

***Earniel*** · 05-14-2002, 11:56 AM

I think I good use one too *wipes a tear away* That was really beautiful Arathorn!

Arathorn · 05-14-2002, 12:40 PM

I almost didn't need to search for the lyrics on that one. That was my favorite song even before I went to kindergarten when I was 4. My late dad said that was the only record in his collection that I listened to then.

StrawberryIcecream · 05-14-2002, 01:54 PM

OK. All faint in shock for i have mangled a song!!!

presenting originally Seasons in the Sun

~Fading to a Nazgul

Goodbye Samwise, It’s hard to die
You say I’ll be ok,
But it’s a lie,
I hear the Nazgul – “Come to me”
And now my heart is filled with fear,
Fow now you shed a single tear.

Goodbye Gandalf, please come to me,
You aren’t here now and
You weren’t in Bree
I see you pacing up and down
With your face set in a frown
As in the dark, I start to drown

we had quests we had jobs we had
evil to destroy,
but the places that weve gone
will be evil b’fore to long.

goodbye my friends, Pip and Merry,
you were always there
for me
And now I see you looking sad,
For I shall soon be something bad
Hate to lose the things we had

goodbye Strider it´s hard to leave
but this darkness I
can just not heave
Now its time for me to go
And become your greatest foe
I hope I do not cause much woe

we had quests we had jobs we had
evil to destroy,
but the places that weve gone
they’ll be evil b’fore to long.
we had quests we had jobs we had
evil to destroy,
but the places that weve gone
they’ll be evil b’fore to long.

goodbye to you, I see the end
I’m cloaked in shadow, no one to defend
And with this wound upon my chest
Blackness in my heart will infest
Because one shard in me does rest

But now I see a shining light,
It wakes me up and makes me want to fight,
Glorfindel puts me on his horse,
I make it ride with all my force,
I beat those nazgul, no remorse.

we had quests we had jobs we had
evil to destroy,
but the places that weve gone
they’ll be evil b’fore to long.

There was darkness there was death, I thought
that I was in hell,
But now everyone is safe for we are housed in Rivendell.
seasons have all gone

There was darkness there was death, I thought
that I was in hell,
But now everyone is safe for we are housed in Rivendell.
seasons have all gone

There was darkness there was death, I thought
that I was in hell,
But now everyone is safe for we are housed in Rivendell.
seasons have all gone

Arathorn · 05-14-2002, 02:16 PM

YAY! another classic 70's (actually, 1974) when I was 3) a good one Strawberry Cobbler.

***Earniel*** · 05-14-2002, 02:36 PM

*applauds* these songs are getting better and better all time.

Radagast The Brown · 05-14-2002, 02:54 PM

Great song Icecream!

Arathorn · 05-14-2002, 03:05 PM

One more before I go to sleep at 3am...(I need to stay up after about 19 hrs for Attack of the Clones!

)

This one's based on "The Look of Love from one of the James Bond Films in the 60's:

The Fool of Tooks
(Originally The Look of Love by Burt Bacharach and Hal David: Sung by Dusty Springfield)

The Fool of Tooks has seen your eye,
A Took your wiles can't fool twice.
The Fool of Tooks, you're seeing so much more
Than some halflings you should seek.
And when your Wraiths have heard,
Well, they'll take their breath away.
I can hardly wait to see you,
Stake my claims around you,
How long I have waited,
Waited just to scare you,
Now that I outflank you;
You've seen the Fool of Tooks,
He's what you face,
The Took that orcs can't erase.
You're mine this Age,
Let this be just the start of
Your many frights like this;
I'll take my kingdom now
and then heal it with a kiss.
I can hardly wait to see you,
Stake my claims around you,
How long I have waited,
Waited just to scare you,
Now that I outflank you;
You better go.
You better go.
I'll see you go.

eowyn144 · 05-14-2002, 03:07 PM

thankyou so much arathorn!!!
*accepts tissues from cobbler*
that song is very sentimental to me! they played it on the last day of our cruise to wake us up in the morning. it's now one of my favourite songs as it reminds me of my holiday every time i hear it!that was such a good version. thankyou so much!
would someone please give this guy an award or something!

StrawberryIcecream · 05-14-2002, 03:12 PM

Is it not reward enough i have mangled his pictures in his honour??!!

but yes very good.

05-13-2002, 02:46 AM	#681
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Hey, Elfmaster, would you mind if I did another version of Candle in the Wind? I mean, yours was terrific, but I was suddenly inspired to mangle it about someone else. . .but of course I'll only do it if it's okay with you. __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

05-13-2002, 05:40 AM	#683
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Thank you, for the song, and the permission to mangle Candle in the Wind again. Here, have some wine. __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

05-13-2002, 05:58 AM	#684
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Thanks matey! Arr, would i ever decline An offer from ye, of wine Go magle friend, mangle i say Arr, the sea be rough today -hic - hic - smiles at blurry world full of mangled songs __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

05-13-2002, 06:01 AM	#685
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Aye, off to mangle, then, ere the sky turns light in the east! Arr! realizes the paper due today still isn't done I'll mangle it some other time, eh? Like tomorrow. __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

05-13-2002, 06:06 AM	#686
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Paper to do eh? I have just had an hour exam. I'm off for study leave now and next exam is on thursday, so i have time, time to be free and mangle and go to the pub and sing and shout 'PRAISE THE LORD for the question on the paper was one i had revised for!' I am contented. Good luck with your papewr cap'n, i wish i could help you. __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

05-13-2002, 06:13 AM	#687
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	Thank you E XK hic Good luck on your exam! And I hope your last one went well...here, have some vodka, to celebrate being done with that one. enjoys not having exams to worry about. remembers the papers. panics. writes a song entitled, The Ballad of Eruviel's senior thesis. Oh it was insanely early on monday morning, and the paper, it still was not done. . . __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

05-13-2002, 06:19 AM	#688
Elfmaster XK Possessive Villain Fancier Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: On my ship, riding the waves YARR! Posts: 2,008	Takes vodka Celebrate good times, come on... sings into distance, dancing with the drunk elf cap'n all the way to the pub. Eruviel panics again for, alas, the paper is still* not done!* __________________ My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies, Fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly - my friends. XK

05-13-2002, 06:21 AM	#689
Eruviel Greenleaf Alcoholic Villain-Fancying Elf Pirate Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Lyonesse Posts: 4,547	but she continues dancing with the Alcoholic First Mate all the way to the pub, because she's sure a few pints will help the paper __________________ Eruviel Greenleaf in a past life. "Whoever has come to understand the world has found only a corpse, and whoever has found a corpse is superior to the world." -The Gospel of Thomas SQUAWK!

05-14-2002, 06:23 AM	#690
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	Another request from eowyn144 Sailing On An Elf Ship (Originally LEAVING ON A JETPLANE by John Denver) All my pipes are packed I'm ready to row I'm marching here towards the shore I hate to break your sup to say goodbye But the Age is breakin' these next few morns Cirdan is waitin' he's callin' me on I hope you won't be lonesome please don't cry Kiss Rosie, Sam, smile for me Tell me that you'll follow me Love her like you've never loved before Cause I'm sailing on an elf ship Don't think that I'll be back again But Sam my wounds hurt so There's so many times I've pushed you down Those many climbs We've sneaked around I tell you now that you've helped bring that ring Every Isle I go I'll think of you Every ring I smoke I'll smoke for you When you come forth I wish we then can sing Kiss Rosie, Sam, smile for me Tell me that you'll follow me Love her like you've never loved before Cause I'm sailing on an elf ship Don't think that I'll be back again But Sam my wounds hurt so Now the time has come to leave you One more time let me hug you Gandalf calls, I'll be on my way Dream about your kids, young dad Fair Elanor and Frodo-Lad Young Rosie-Lass, and Merry, come what may... Kiss Rosie, Sam, smile for me Tell me that you'll follow me Love her like you've never loved before Cause I'm sailing on an elf ship Don't think that I'll be back again But Sam my wounds hurt so Sailing on an elf ship Sailing on an elf ship __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 05-14-2002 at 01:02 PM.

05-14-2002, 11:31 AM	#691
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	pasees eowny tissues i have a feeling she'll need them. thats a very sentimental song to her! __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

05-14-2002, 11:56 AM	#692
*Earniel* The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium) Posts: 14,363	I think I good use one too wipes a tear away That was really beautiful Arathorn! __________________ We are not things.

05-14-2002, 12:40 PM	#693
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	I almost didn't need to search for the lyrics on that one. That was my favorite song even before I went to kindergarten when I was 4. My late dad said that was the only record in his collection that I listened to then. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 05-14-2002 at 12:41 PM.

05-14-2002, 01:54 PM	#694
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	OK. All faint in shock for i have mangled a song!!! presenting originally Seasons in the Sun ~Fading to a Nazgul Goodbye Samwise, It’s hard to die You say I’ll be ok, But it’s a lie, I hear the Nazgul – “Come to me” And now my heart is filled with fear, Fow now you shed a single tear. Goodbye Gandalf, please come to me, You aren’t here now and You weren’t in Bree I see you pacing up and down With your face set in a frown As in the dark, I start to drown we had quests we had jobs we had evil to destroy, but the places that weve gone will be evil b’fore to long. goodbye my friends, Pip and Merry, you were always there for me And now I see you looking sad, For I shall soon be something bad Hate to lose the things we had goodbye Strider it´s hard to leave but this darkness I can just not heave Now its time for me to go And become your greatest foe I hope I do not cause much woe we had quests we had jobs we had evil to destroy, but the places that weve gone they’ll be evil b’fore to long. we had quests we had jobs we had evil to destroy, but the places that weve gone they’ll be evil b’fore to long. goodbye to you, I see the end I’m cloaked in shadow, no one to defend And with this wound upon my chest Blackness in my heart will infest Because one shard in me does rest But now I see a shining light, It wakes me up and makes me want to fight, Glorfindel puts me on his horse, I make it ride with all my force, I beat those nazgul, no remorse. we had quests we had jobs we had evil to destroy, but the places that weve gone they’ll be evil b’fore to long. There was darkness there was death, I thought that I was in hell, But now everyone is safe for we are housed in Rivendell. seasons have all gone There was darkness there was death, I thought that I was in hell, But now everyone is safe for we are housed in Rivendell. seasons have all gone There was darkness there was death, I thought that I was in hell, But now everyone is safe for we are housed in Rivendell. seasons have all gone __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

05-14-2002, 02:16 PM	#695
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	YAY! another classic 70's (actually, 1974) when I was 3) a good one Strawberry Cobbler. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures...

05-14-2002, 02:36 PM	#696
*Earniel* The Chocoholic Sea Elf Administrator Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: N?n in Eilph (Belgium) Posts: 14,363	applauds these songs are getting better and better all time. __________________ We are not things.

05-14-2002, 02:54 PM	#697
Radagast The Brown Elf Lord Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 6,975	Great song Icecream! __________________ Lalala... poof! AboutNewJersey.com - New Jersey Travel and Tourism Guide

05-14-2002, 03:05 PM	#698
Arathorn Bard of Mangled Songs Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: West of Middle Earth...oh alright...Manila Posts: 2,679	One more before I go to sleep at 3am...(I need to stay up after about 19 hrs for Attack of the Clones! ) This one's based on "The Look of Love from one of the James Bond Films in the 60's: The Fool of Tooks (Originally The Look of Love by Burt Bacharach and Hal David: Sung by Dusty Springfield) The Fool of Tooks has seen your eye, A Took your wiles can't fool twice. The Fool of Tooks, you're seeing so much more Than some halflings you should seek. And when your Wraiths have heard, Well, they'll take their breath away. I can hardly wait to see you, Stake my claims around you, How long I have waited, Waited just to scare you, Now that I outflank you; You've seen the Fool of Tooks, He's what you face, The Took that orcs can't erase. You're mine this Age, Let this be just the start of Your many frights like this; I'll take my kingdom now and then heal it with a kiss. I can hardly wait to see you, Stake my claims around you, How long I have waited, Waited just to scare you, Now that I outflank you; You better go. You better go. I'll see you go. __________________ Power attracts the corruptible. Absolute power attracts the absolutely corruptible. -Missionaria Protectiva, Frank Herbert *Accio, Ash Nazg!* Elennuru s?la lúmenn' omentielvo* (The Death Star shines on the hour of our meeting) - Darth Arathorn Put aside the ranger... Start looking for Mumakil action figures... Last edited by Arathorn : 05-14-2002 at 03:07 PM.

05-14-2002, 03:07 PM	#699
eowyn144 Elven Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 435	thankyou so much arathorn!!! accepts tissues from cobbler that song is very sentimental to me! they played it on the last day of our cruise to wake us up in the morning. it's now one of my favourite songs as it reminds me of my holiday every time i hear it!that was such a good version. thankyou so much! would someone please give this guy an award or something! __________________ If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe

05-14-2002, 03:12 PM	#700
StrawberryIcecream Elf Lord Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: In my jeans Posts: 915	Is it not reward enough i have mangled his pictures in his honour??!! but yes very good. __________________ www.foolofatook.com for all you pippin's out there.

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