10-21-2007, 07:57 PM | #41 |
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HOLY CRAP!! That post was incredibly, if subtly, hardcore! Claudious is my MAN!! Yeah!
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10-21-2007, 08:07 PM | #42 |
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Do elaborate on that, my fellow writer.
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10-21-2007, 08:14 PM | #43 |
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If you insist
Claudious asesses the situation, but doesnt act on it. He's cool, and calculating in the line of fire. Quite literally too, because Echo apparently has it out for him. He knows that he needs more proof of Echo's actions before he can act, and he follows his intellect through on that decision. He's calm, loyal, and a survivor. Traits that are shown throughout your tale, but he is really illustrated here as a person who has the best nterests of the whole at heart, but knows how to act in that regard. I hope that does it.
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10-21-2007, 08:43 PM | #44 |
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Wow, that pretty much hit the nail on the head in regards to Claudious
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10-22-2007, 08:16 PM | #45 |
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I really think you guy will like this post and I really need some feed back on this scene. Too much, not enough? Let me know
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10-22-2007, 08:22 PM | #46 |
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Me personally, I thought it was very nicely done. Not too showy, not too fancy, just right. I do want to know who spilled the beans on them both, but maybe we'll find out later
In any case, I thought it was a very warm scene, and it made me smile and giggle a little too, especially when Lark and Dove walked in on our couple of the week (at least here at the 'Moot ). And I confess, I leaned back in me rolly-chair and let off a wee giggle.
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10-22-2007, 08:47 PM | #47 |
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Romantic scenes aren't my best suit
You know me, I had to put some humor into it Glad this scene made you giggle What did you think about the twist?
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10-22-2007, 08:52 PM | #48 |
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The twist kinda blindsided me. Almost rudely, there I was, reading minding my own buisness, then suddenly-WHAM- I'm hit from behind with what felt like an empty SOBE bottle. The I said "Am I...I'm bleedin'....Somebody's gettin the a**-kickin of their lifetime."
But i was too drawn in to really follow through with that, so it'll have to wait. But seriously, the twist caught me off gaurd, sent me reeling, then shed some light on a couple of subjects. Very interesting.....must.....have....more.....
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10-23-2007, 03:41 PM | #49 |
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And totally smashed Tuinor's theory
On with another post
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10-23-2007, 04:31 PM | #50 |
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hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe.....Tuinor....the fool.
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10-23-2007, 06:02 PM | #51 |
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I know it's hard for you, but be nice
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10-23-2007, 07:08 PM | #52 |
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OH MY GO*!! Tuinor tells me the EXACT same thing in real life, usually right after I've made some funny joke.
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10-23-2007, 07:17 PM | #53 |
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Geez, man, this last post...blody, bloody, bloody.....I dont think that word should be allowed that many times in one sentence!
Seriosly, someone should just kill Echo. You know what? I think I'll do it. *Hurls bullet at Echo, which bounces harmlessly off, leaving naught but a small welt* Dang, and I thought that was how you used those....Oh, well....on to Plan B! *Prepares to hurl porcupine at Echo*
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hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe.....Acalewia...the foo-wait! She told me to be nice.....Acalewia.....the incredibly perceptive and astoundingly brilliant person......hehehehehehehehe *giggle* he
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Nautipus, you're giggling like a schoolgirl again
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10-23-2007, 09:00 PM | #57 |
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I'm doing wha-.....AAWW DANGIT!
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I've got a bit of catching up to do, I see. Hmm. I guess I'll start by saying I'm no good at romantic scenes, so Acalewia, you're on your own. Sorry. Still, I like the way the plot has developed. Ryman was right, of course. Too bad he didn't live to see it. I'm still catching up on a lot of things, so I will probably post again later. I have to go now though. See you all.
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10-24-2007, 12:10 PM | #59 |
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What? GO!? BULL***T!!! Your gonna stay right HERE
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I'm hungry now. Darn you.
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