10-19-2007, 12:58 PM | #41 |
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Hmmmmmm.......
Neat. More to come like this I hope. Now I'm really drawn in. *Actually falls off edge of seat* That always happens!
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10-21-2007, 06:08 PM | #42 | |
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11-01-2007, 12:32 AM | #43 | |
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T, man! Get to postin'! C'MON, DUDE, I'm waiting for another installment and I want it NOW.
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One of my top ten favorite movies. "You ever try to flick a fly? "No." "It's a waste of time." "Can you see it?" "No." "It's right there!" "Where? "There!" "What is it?" "A crab." "A crab? I dont see any crab." "How?! It's right there!!" "Where?" "There!!!!" "Oh." -Excerpts from A Tale of Two Morons |
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11-02-2007, 12:25 PM | #44 | |
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11-15-2007, 11:20 PM | #45 | |
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As far as we know..... T, Great post. I really liked Sky's little internal dialogue about the dwarf, made me gig-laugh! I said laugh, it made me laugh. Although, I hate to think what kind of suspicion the group's going to com under now, after Sky's....outburst.
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11-20-2007, 01:22 PM | #50 |
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Glad to see college ain't killed you yet
How the hell did I get caught by the damn Rule?
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11-20-2007, 03:29 PM | #51 | |
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Hey, good to see you here, you bird-brained son of a mothball! Keep postin' I'm gettin restless.
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12-02-2007, 01:28 PM | #52 |
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Okay, I know people are starting to get impatient with me, but I promise I'll have two new posts up soon.
The reason for there being two is that my mind jumped out of chronological order, and I wrote down a sequence that's too far ahead in the story, so I need to write another one to bridge the time-gap. Anyways, like I said, I'll have two up soon, so I ask you to please be patient, and as always thanks for reading! |
12-03-2007, 02:20 PM | #53 |
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You mean I have to be patient? Rats!
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01-08-2008, 12:20 PM | #54 |
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Nice, T. I liked this last one. I'm really looking forward to more, seriously.
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01-09-2008, 07:25 PM | #55 |
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I loved these posts. Keep it up.
I liked the dwarf's reaction to his brother getting kicked: "He shoulda kicked you harder"
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01-29-2008, 05:53 PM | #56 |
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Wow, T. Very nicely done.
....that's all I've got, man.
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01-29-2008, 07:55 PM | #57 |
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Really? I didn't quite like this last one... The Elvish was fun to make, but otherwise it wasn't well-written, in my opinion. Still, it's really just a kind of stepping-stone to the real action coming up in just a few posts. It's gonna get insane, trust me.
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01-29-2008, 08:13 PM | #58 |
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I actually really liked it. I loved the internal conflict that's developing.
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01-31-2008, 12:52 PM | #59 |
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I really liked this post. The Elvish was cool. I really liked the internal conflict Aisha is having. Although, the fact that Aevor seems to be on edge is freaking me out and making me wonder what he has up his sleeve.
I think it's well written, Tunior. Keep it up.
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03-04-2008, 03:21 AM | #60 |
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Alright. New incentive to wrap this up soon: There's a creative writing exam being held on my campus for short stories (entries being between 20 - 40 pages in length). This one's at ~27. If I can bring it to an awesome climax within thirteen pages, I think I'll submit it. What do you guys think about me doing that?
I'm asking because I value all your critical opinions on it, and I wouldn't want to ruin the story for any of you if it meant slaughtering the plot in order to make it short enough to enter in a contest. (It's only "if" I can do that... I had intended for this to turn out at least ten pages longer than that, ~50, so...) |
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