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Old 05-13-2008, 05:24 AM   #461
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Lord, I know not what lies you have heard, nor/_h_n_e/; but we came not/ _e_/-/h_n_e_/. Guiltless we have/_o_t_/save maybe of folly, to listen to the words of fell Fëanor, and/_e_o_e/as if/_e_o_t_d/_i_h/_i_e/, and as/b_i_f_y/. No evil did we do/o_/our/r_a_/,/but suffered/_u_s_l_e_/a great wrong; and/ f_r_a_e/_t/. [/B]For this we are [/B]/_a_e_/t_l_/-/b_a_e_s /_o/_o_/and/_r_a_o_a_l_/to the border:/_n_r_l_/a_/you know, for we have/o_/our/_o_a_t_/been/s_l_n_/before you/, and thus earned your anger. But now these charges are no longer to be borne, and the truth you shall know.
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"Lord, I know not what lies you have heard, nor /_h_n_e/;
but we came not /_e_/-/h_n_e_/. Guiltless we have /_o_t_/
save maybe of folly, to listen to the words of fell Fëanor, and become
as if besotted with wine, and as briefly. No evil did we do of our /r_a_/,
but suffered ourselves a great wrong; and forgave it.
For this we are /_a_e_/t_l_/-/b_a_e_s/ to you and /_r_a_o_a_l_/
to the border:/_n_r_l_/ as you know, for we have of our /_o_a_t_/
been silent before you, and thus earned your anger. But now these charges
are no longer to be borne, and the truth you shall know.

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Old 05-13-2008, 07:30 AM   #464
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The speaker is Angrod.

the 'have' in line 2 is incorrect
the 'of' in line 4 is incorrect
the 'border' in line 6 is incorrect
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"Lord, I know not what lies you have heard, nor /_h_n_e/;
but we came not red-handed. Guiltless we came forth
save maybe of folly, to listen to the words of fell Fëanor, and become
as if besotted with wine, and as briefly. No evil did we do on our road,
but suffered ourselves a great wrong; and forgave it.
For this we are /_a_e_/t_l_/-/b_a_e_s/ to you and /_r_a_o_a_l_/
to the /_o_d_r/:/_n_r_l_/ as you know, for we have of our /_o_a_t_/
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Old 05-13-2008, 08:12 AM   #466
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'whence'
'named tale-bearers'
'treasonable to the Noldor: untruly'
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Old 05-13-2008, 08:54 AM   #468
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Old 05-14-2008, 11:50 AM   #469
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Oh ok, I'll take the last word.

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W_a_e_e_/h_p_e_s/_o/_h_/r_s_/o_/m_/s_u_f/,/
_h_n/_h_/S/./-/_/./s/_e_/t_e_r/_l_w_/o_/i_/,/
a_/a_y/_a_e/_/h_v_/f_u_d/_/g_o_/h_m_/f_r/_h_s/!/
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Whatever/happens/to/the/rest/of/my/stuff/,/
when/the/S/./-/B/./s/get/their/claws/on/it/,/
at/any/case/I/have/found/a/good/home/for/this/!/

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Old 05-14-2008, 01:33 PM   #473
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It is Frodo and 'case' is your only mistake. Great job.
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W_y/,/_/p_o_l_/o_/t_e/_o_d_r/,/_h_/s_o_l_/w_/l_n_e_/s_r_e/_h_/j_a_o_s/_a_a_/,
w_o/_a_n_t/_e_p/_s/_o_/e_e_/t_e_r/_w_/r_a_m/_e_u_e/_r_m/_h_i_/E_e_y/?
_n_/t_o_g_/h_/m_y/_e/_o_/t_e_r/_o_/,/a_e/_o_/t_e_/a_d/_e/_f/_n_/k_n/?
_e_g_a_c_/c_l_s/_e/_e_c_/,/b_t/_v_n/_e_e/_t/_t_e_w_s_/I/_o_l_/n_t/_w_l_/l_n_e_/i_/
t_e/_a_e/_a_d/_i_h/_h_/k_n/_f/_y/_a_h_r/'/_/s_a_e_/a_d/_f/_h_/t_i_f/_f/_y/_r_a_u_e/.
_e_/I/_m/_o_/t_e/_n_y/_a_i_n_/i_/t_i_/v_l_a_t/_e_p_e/./_n_/h_v_/y_/n_t/_l_/l_s_/y_u_/K_n_/?
A_d/_h_t/_l_e/_a_e/_e/_o_/l_s_/,/c_o_e_/h_r_/i_/a/_a_r_w/_a_d/_e_w_e_/t_e/_o_n_a_n_/
a_d/_h_/s_a/?
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Why/,/o/people/of/the/Noldor/,/why/should/we/l_n_e_/s_r_e/_h_/j_a_o_s/_a_a_/,
who/cannot/help/us/_o_/e_e_/t_e_r/_w_/r_a_m/_e_u_e/_r_m/_h_i_/E_e_y/?
And/though/he/may/be/_o_/t_e_r/_o_/,/are/_o_/t_e_/and/be/of/one/kin/?
_e_g_a_c_/c_l_s/_e/_e_c_/,/but/even/_e_e/_t/_t_e_w_s_/I/would/not/_w_l_/l_n_e_/i_/
t_e/_a_e/_a_d/_i_h/_h_/k_n/_f/_y/_a_h_r/'/_/s_a_e_/a_d/_f/_h_/t_i_f/_f/_y/_r_a_u_e/.
_e_/I/_m/_o_/t_e/_n_y/_a_i_n_/i_/t_i_/v_l_a_t/_e_p_e/./_n_/h_v_/y_/n_t/_l_/l_s_/y_u_/K_n_/?
And/what/_l_e/_a_e/_e/_o_/l_s_/,/c_o_e_/h_r_/i_/a/_a_r_w/_a_d/_e_w_e_/t_e/_o_n_a_n_/
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"help" is wrong
Er...'may' isn't wrong, but that's a word that shouldn't be there at all. My bad.
'be' is wrong

So we have:

Why/,/o/people/of/the/Noldor/,/why/should/we/l_n_e_/s_r_e/_h_/j_a_o_s/_a_a_/,
who/cannot/_e_p/us/_o_/e_e_/t_e_r/_w_/r_a_m/_e_u_e/_r_m/_h_i_/E_e_y/?
And/though/he/be/_o_/t_e_r/_o_/,/are/_o_/t_e_/and/_e/of/one/kin/?
_e_g_a_c_/c_l_s/_e/_e_c_/,/but/even/_e_e/_t/_t_e_w_s_/I/would/not/_w_l_/l_n_e_/i_/
t_e/_a_e/_a_d/_i_h/_h_/k_n/_f/_y/_a_h_r/'/_/s_a_e_/a_d/_f/_h_/t_i_f/_f/_y/_r_a_u_e/.
_e_/I/_m/_o_/t_e/_n_y/_a_i_n_/i_/t_i_/v_l_a_t/_e_p_e/./_n_/h_v_/y_/n_t/_l_/l_s_/y_u_/K_n_/?
And/what/_l_e/_a_e/_e/_o_/l_s_/,/c_o_e_/h_r_/i_/a/_a_r_w/_a_d/_e_w_e_/t_e/_o_n_a_n_/
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Why, O people of the Noldor, why should we linger /s_r_e/the jealous Valar,
who cannot keep as /_o_/even their own realm secure from their Enemy?
And though he may be now their foe, are not they and he of one kin?
_e_g_a_c_/colds we reach, but even were it otherwise I could not dwell longer in
the same land nigh the kin of my father's slayer and of the thief of my treasure.
Yet I am not the only valiant in this valiant people. And have ye not all lost your King?
And what else have ye not lost, cooped here in a narrow land between the mountains and the sea?

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