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October of 2006. Man that is a long time!
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08-17-2007, 12:29 AM | #22 | |
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I just caught up on what you've written so far, Tuinor . A very interesting story still. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next . . . so
Oh, one thing you may want to alter is the name of the princess. "Snow White" keeps making me think of Disney, with the silly cartoon character singing, "I'm wishing . . . I'm wishing . . . for the one I love . . . to find me . . . to find me . . . today . . ." Don't make me think of that . Your Snow White comes across as a much more serious and intelligent character, but her name keeps making me imagine the cartoon .
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08-28-2007, 03:31 PM | #23 | |
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08-28-2007, 11:32 PM | #24 |
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I'm really likin' this story so far, iced T. Im lovin the character developement and dialogue. Keep up the good work!
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08-29-2007, 01:59 PM | #25 | |
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08-29-2007, 02:04 PM | #26 |
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I just read your most recent post and look forward to hearing more .
Just one note is that you may not want to have Aevor and Sky talk about what order Aevor will discuss these creatures in. It doesn't really matter at all what order he uses to talk about the creatures, so having him ask Sky what order he'd like to hear about them in doesn't really add anything.
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08-29-2007, 02:57 PM | #27 |
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I just read your last posts, T. I really enjoy this story so far. please keep going, quickly. I want more.
Now.
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08-29-2007, 05:35 PM | #28 |
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Wow. Keep up the good work, Tuinor. I'm literaly on the edge on my seat to hear about these creatures that will appear at some point I'm sure.
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08-29-2007, 07:58 PM | #29 |
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I'm also interested to see how they'll figure into events.
Wouldn't it be funny if the monsters never showed up?
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08-29-2007, 11:17 PM | #30 |
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Just read your latest post. It was a neat little history lesson. I'd eventually like to hear more about the mentioned nations, but maybe that will come later. I especially like how organic your characters are/were/will be. Keep it up, iced T
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08-30-2007, 11:27 AM | #31 | ||
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09-14-2007, 09:51 AM | #32 |
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Hey, all! Sorry about not posting on here in a while. I've been real busy with college life, which is why I guess I haven't replied here that much.
Thanks a lot for the input, Lief! I'm glad that the whole story isn't ruined by Disney. *shakes hand angrily* DARN YOU, DISNEY! Acalewia, I appreciate the support you've been giving as well, and I'm sorry I don't get around to posting about your stories (which have so far all been excellent). About the twists, well: Good stories are like roller coasters, they're funner if you add more twists. Nautipus... you're weird. Just kidding, man! Thanks for the complement! Last edited by Tuinor : 09-14-2007 at 09:53 AM. |
09-14-2007, 11:43 AM | #33 | |
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*Casts scathing look towards Tuinor*
I am not, and just because you said that, I am going to join forces with Disney, and lead an army of opium-addicted chinamen to desroy you! Anyway, great section about the Feints. Seemed somewhat familiar . I rally am looking forward to seeing what they can do, and how your little troupe reacts. BTW, thanks for finally posting! I've been waiting for more! I also wonder, are we going to see these people who have had encounters with Feints? Where do they come from? What's their purpose? For Tuinor's eyes only:
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Love the post about the Feints. I have a feeling that
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09-25-2007, 11:19 AM | #35 |
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I like this new post!!
FUNNY DWARF MAKE NAUTIPUS GIGGLE! I thought it was really neat how you described the dwarf. And also about you-know-who. It really made my day to see how angry he was. Funny, funny post!
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09-26-2007, 07:22 PM | #36 |
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Great post, Tuinor. Loved to see how POed who know who is.
Nautipus, are you giggling like a school girl again
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10-15-2007, 12:37 PM | #37 |
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Yay! You posted! Just messing with you.
I want to know what the hell that was to make Aevor react like that. Btw, Aevor is becoming my Fav charactor. Just thought you wanted to know
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10-15-2007, 12:45 PM | #38 |
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Aevor's my favorite as well. It's the mysterious aura he gives off. It makes him interesting to read/write about.
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10-17-2007, 11:13 AM | #39 |
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Well, hello.
This last couple of posts really has me going. I really cant say that Aevor is my favorite character or not......actually, you know what, he isnt! Ha! Take that!
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10-19-2007, 12:18 PM | #40 |
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Oooo! I like this new post. *sits on the edge of her seat, dangoursly close to falling * So many questions
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