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Have you ever thought about being a creative writing teacher? You do a great job at helping people improve their writing. I would have never thought of some of these things had you not pointed them out
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10-25-2006, 04:28 AM | #22 | |
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Also, those were some excellent answers. You sounded really sure of what you said in them all. Like you know Erane inside out, what she'd do in any given situation.
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08-17-2007, 08:47 PM | #24 |
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Hello one and all! I hope all is well and that you are still continuing to write. I hope this thread becomes undead because i am going to post a character on this thread for replies from other people and writers.
Hildeguard : Hildeguard is a teenager by our standards of about 18 or 19. He lives in a village that is surrounded on all sides by mountains known as the Uegathar Mountains. (There is umlautes on the first "U" but i don't knooow how to put them on right now. I forgot. ) The village is one that raises its own crops and does trade within itself. (Because to cross the mountains would be too hard. Not worth a life) Hildeguard is one of the main characters(more to come) and his father is a farmer much like all of the other villagers, farmers, except the skilled men like blacksmiths, butchers, and school teacher, etc. No one knows what happened to his mother she disappeared. Hildeguard has not learned to fight yet because he has no need, being secure inside a mountain range that no one ever comes in except very rarely. Then one day a group of knights come and. . . . I would like to ask for you to please post and give me comments. After knowning that we have lift off I will write more. Well ttyl |
08-17-2007, 09:20 PM | #25 |
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Thanks for starting this back up again, Neulbar. I'd like to see this thread revived as well, so here's to doing my part:
Neulbar, I'd like to know just a few more things about your character, Hildegaurd. Have you thought about his appearance or his demeanor at all? How about his strengths and weaknesses (not just in combat, either )? I'm not sure if you're saving them for later, or just accidently forgot them, but they are rather vital to a main character. If you're having trouble with them don't be afraid to ask for help, that's what this thread is for! |
09-03-2007, 10:44 PM | #26 | |
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09-04-2007, 03:21 PM | #27 | |
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I'm just messin' with ya, Nuelbar ; you're getting this character down good enough. Miniscule details aren't always too important, so I won't try and force you to think of all of them. I'd be careful, though, about trying to make a character that everyone is supposed to like. That can cause some people to not like them. Unless, of course, the character is in fact extremely likeable. Then they have no choice. |
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09-05-2007, 07:53 AM | #28 | |
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09-22-2007, 11:48 PM | #29 | |
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The characters eyes would be blue. I also agree with your statement, Tuinor, about some not liking my character because everyone else likes him. He is the only boy in his family's lineage, the rest are girls. This makes most of the people in his village, like him more. Sorry guys i can't post more but i am going to bed. |
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09-27-2007, 04:12 PM | #30 | |
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I guess that great minds think alike! I proposed something similar a while ago during a Role Play. That was mainly due to the fact that all of my characters have their own file already anyway. I used this sort of format. The following is a description of one of my Role Play characters. Quote:
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12-12-2007, 11:47 PM | #31 | |
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