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Old 11-29-2008, 04:37 AM   #261
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...it's not much of a show if somebody doesn't suffer, and preferably at length. Suffering is beautiful in any case, and so is anguish; but as for loathing, and bitterness... I don't think they belong on the stage at all.

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Old 11-29-2008, 04:38 AM   #262
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Indeed.

A final question for current page...

Pete didn't find it at all amusing.

or

Pete didn't find it amusing at all.

Glad to know.
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Old 11-29-2008, 07:28 AM   #263
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In Swedish we have called "syftningsfel".

A sentens like this...

The man, who had brown car, got a puncture.

This alludes to the man, not the car.

Is this phenomen called an Error of Allusion?
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Old 11-29-2008, 05:57 PM   #264
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Pete didn't find it at all amusing.

or

Pete didn't find it amusing at all.
These two sentences are equivalent in meaning. You could use either one.

I'm afraid I can't answer the last question. I feel like there's a more technical name in english for that type of sentence where the main verb gets attatched to the wrong referent, but I can't remember what it is.
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Old 11-30-2008, 03:00 AM   #265
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Old 11-30-2008, 07:15 AM   #266
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In Swedish we have called "syftningsfel".

A sentens like this...

The man, who had brown car, got a puncture.

This alludes to the man, not the car.
A dangling modifier, maybe? Though that isn't a type of sentence as such.
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When England is not England, when mankind
Has blown himself to pieces. Still the sea,
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Old 11-30-2008, 07:57 AM   #267
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Old 12-02-2008, 03:51 PM   #268
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I'd say a "misplaced modifier" would be a better word for "syftningsfel".
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Old 12-03-2008, 12:58 AM   #269
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Old 12-04-2008, 07:17 PM   #270
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Ich weiß nicht, was vor sich geht, aber ich dachte, ich könnte auch sagen, etwas in einer Sprache diffrient
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Old 12-06-2008, 05:36 PM   #271
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Old 02-13-2009, 04:17 PM   #273
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Old 02-13-2009, 04:21 PM   #274
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Old 04-05-2009, 04:13 AM   #275
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Im back at working on my hobby-project of translating this Swedish children's book to English.

Now here comes a sentence in which there is a word describing the way the top of the waves are behaving.

Below lay the lake, still the colour of ink and the whitecapped waves were still hissing.

Im not quite sure that hissing is the correct adjective to describe the behaviour of the whitcaps.

Glad for any assistance you can give me.

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Old 04-05-2009, 05:20 AM   #276
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Murmuring would be something I would write. Or whispering.
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Old 04-05-2009, 05:30 AM   #277
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Old 04-05-2009, 05:36 AM   #278
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I think I would have indeed chosen the word hissing. Because that's exactly what the whitecaps do in my mind. "Hissing waves" generates some hundred hits on google. But maybe a native English speaker could have a say on this matter.
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Old 04-05-2009, 05:43 AM   #279
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thank you too, Jonathan. Any input is most gratefully recieved.

Sometimes I get stuck on minor words and matters of phrasing.
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Old 04-05-2009, 05:55 AM   #280
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Here's another one:

(after a storm)

The lake was now quite peaceful (or calm), not a stir could be seen on its (or the) surface.

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