Creatively express your admiration for first LOTR film, in a poem - Page 2

Sheeana · 08-12-2003, 05:21 PM

Pip! Pip!

Lizra · 08-12-2003, 11:59 PM

Awwww, screw you guys!

Sheeana · 08-13-2003, 12:05 AM

But Lizra, the fact that yours is fabulous goes without saying!

Lizra · 08-13-2003, 12:08 AM

Oh..well that makes sense then...

PippinTook · 08-13-2003, 12:22 AM

wow! you are really talented! I like to write poems and all, but those are not poems, they are the soul of some person deep in your heart! it is amazing!, here is my attempt to dust the path you have walked with my useless folly.
Alas for Glorifindel,
I once knew him well,
Alas Tom Bomadilo,
And dear old man willow.
Arwen? Arwen who?
And Good old Fatty Bolger too.
The romance was sweet,
And I love the hairy feet.
Gandalf and Galadriel?
I never saw them cast a spell?
But Faramir, is the worst,
I say, New Line is cursed

actually, i liked the movie, but nothing rymed eith worst, actually, cursed doesn't even ryme with worst! *shakes head sadly* I can't ryme, thank you for taking 10 seconds to read my scribble

Valaróma · 08-13-2003, 10:27 AM

That was good

Get ready for a classic MY poem

Lights flickered off as my heart grew alert.
But the time I'd been waiting for made me feel like dirt.
Where was Gorfindel? And good old Jolly Tom?
Is this really the movie that was supposed to be the bomb?

Elrond disappointing, not tall and fair.
Did Peter Jackson really truly care?
What happened with Galadriel didn't seem the same.
And what about Fatty? I hang my head in shame.

And when I read the beloved books again.
I cease to remember, with much tearful pain.
Of the way things were before the gloom.
Before Elijah Wood and Orlando Bloom

Varda Oiolosseo · 08-13-2003, 11:34 AM

wow that's good!

Well done to everyone!

Hasty Ent · 08-13-2003, 11:34 AM

Nice! -- and Lizra, I really liked your contribution, too.

seems the majority are not positive -- where's Black Breathalizer?

I'm waiting for his paean.

Sheeana · 08-13-2003, 07:39 PM

Bags not for alerting him of this.

Lizra · 08-13-2003, 07:46 PM

Where's this thread starter? Hello....PMills....A little feedback please! How you like it?

Elf Girl · 08-14-2003, 08:32 AM

I don't think BB reads the Writer's Workshop forum. Of course nothing in text could compete with the utter perfection of films.

Gwaimir Windgem · 08-20-2003, 01:14 AM

[dripping=sarcasm]Now, Now, be fair...he did say the Wargs weren't quite right.[/dripping] Give him his due.

Gwaimir Windgem · 08-20-2003, 01:22 AM

Lizra, while of course you know I can't officially condone any poem which says that any part of PJ's work was better than the correspondent part of Tolkien's, between you and me, it was well written indeed (even if I don't agree with all the content)

Elf Girl · 08-28-2003, 01:44 PM

There was a professor called Tolkien,
But now all his works have been broken.
Peter Jackson filmed fast,
And with romance and laughs,
He left of the books not a token.

***Tessar*** · 08-31-2003, 10:39 PM

There once was a book,
Called Lord of the Rings,
by good J.R. Tolkien,
A professor or something.

And then came a man,
on a loooong train trip,
who opened the book,
and just couldn't quit.

Jackson's vision was grand,
like a day in the sun,
but the acting was bland,
and the drama unfun!

So then came the music,
I really liked that!
So moving! So bold!
I ran out to buy that!

On the way too the store,
I tripped on a moth,
who called me a fink,
and flew off in a huff!

And so to this day,
I all ways do try,
not to trip over moths,
when music I buy!

But back to the movie,
with acting so bland,
and music so bold,
and dancing can-cans.

The balrog was awsome,
like a firey flame,
which is rather redundant,
but oh, what the hay.

Good Gandalf I loved,
his magic was sweet,
his 'dieing' was bad,
But I'm over that now, I think.

There's no more to say,
except it was grand,
as a movie I loved it,
as the book it was sad!

~*~*~*~*~*~

Annnnnywhoooo. I rock.

And lizra, that was AWSOME! Hehehehe...

Lizra · 09-01-2003, 09:08 AM

Yes you do!

Watch those moths though! Dangerous creatures!

Thank you !

08-12-2003, 11:59 PM	#22
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08-13-2003, 12:08 AM	#24
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08-13-2003, 12:22 AM	#25
PippinTook The Infamous Tea Hobbit Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Riding my Attack Llama, CORY! Posts: 1,162	wow! you are really talented! I like to write poems and all, but those are not poems, they are the soul of some person deep in your heart! it is amazing!, here is my attempt to dust the path you have walked with my useless folly. Alas for Glorifindel, I once knew him well, Alas Tom Bomadilo, And dear old man willow. Arwen? Arwen who? And Good old Fatty Bolger too. The romance was sweet, And I love the hairy feet. Gandalf and Galadriel? I never saw them cast a spell? But Faramir, is the worst, I say, New Line is cursed actually, i liked the movie, but nothing rymed eith worst, actually, cursed doesn't even ryme with worst! shakes head sadly I can't ryme, thank you for taking 10 seconds to read my scribble __________________ http://jupiter.walagata.com/w/shanakdakhete/svbf.gif If I can stop one heart from aching, I shall not live in vain. -Emily Dickinson But the Master comes, and the foolish crowd Never can quite understand The worth of a soul and the change that is wrought By the touch of the Master's hand. Though she be but little, she is fierce! -MSND

08-13-2003, 10:27 AM	#26
Valaróma Banned Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: In a state of confusion Posts: 50	That was good Get ready for a classic MY poem Lights flickered off as my heart grew alert. But the time I'd been waiting for made me feel like dirt. Where was Gorfindel? And good old Jolly Tom? Is this really the movie that was supposed to be the bomb? Elrond disappointing, not tall and fair. Did Peter Jackson really truly care? What happened with Galadriel didn't seem the same. And what about Fatty? I hang my head in shame. And when I read the beloved books again. I cease to remember, with much tearful pain. Of the way things were before the gloom. Before Elijah Wood and Orlando Bloom Last edited by Valaróma : 08-14-2003 at 09:21 AM.

08-13-2003, 11:34 AM	#28
Hasty Ent Elf Lord Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 516	Nice! -- and Lizra, I really liked your contribution, too. seems the majority are not positive -- where's Black Breathalizer? I'm waiting for his paean. __________________ Patriotism is your conviction that this country is superior to all other countries because you were born in it. George Bernard Shaw (1856 - 1950)

08-12-2003, 05:21 PM	#21
Sheeana Lord of the Pants Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,382	Pip! Pip!

08-13-2003, 12:05 AM	#23
Sheeana Lord of the Pants Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,382	But Lizra, the fact that yours is fabulous goes without saying!

08-13-2003, 11:34 AM	#27
Varda Oiolosseo Tea Bag Queen Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Mirkwood Posts: 973	wow that's good! Well done to everyone!

08-13-2003, 07:39 PM	#29
Sheeana Lord of the Pants Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,382	Bags not for alerting him of this.

08-13-2003, 07:46 PM	#30
Lizra Domesticated Swing Babe Join Date: May 2002 Location: Reality Posts: 5,340	Where's this thread starter? Hello....PMills....A little feedback please! How you like it? __________________ Happy Atheist Go Democrats!

08-14-2003, 08:32 AM	#31
Elf Girl Lurker Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Lothlórien Posts: 3,419	I don't think BB reads the Writer's Workshop forum. Of course nothing in text could compete with the utter perfection of films. __________________ There's antimony, arsenic, aluminum, selenium...

08-20-2003, 01:14 AM	#32
Gwaimir Windgem Dread Mothy Lord and Halfwitted Apprentice Loremaster Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Thomas Aquinas College, Santa Paula, CA Posts: 10,820	[dripping=sarcasm]Now, Now, be fair...he did say the Wargs weren't quite right.[/dripping] Give him his due. __________________ Crux fidelis, inter omnes arbor una nobilis. Nulla talem silva profert, fronde, flore, germine. Dulce lignum, dulce clavo, dulce pondus sustinens. 'With a melon?' - Eric Idle Last edited by Gwaimir Windgem : 08-20-2003 at 01:15 AM.

08-20-2003, 01:22 AM	#33
Gwaimir Windgem Dread Mothy Lord and Halfwitted Apprentice Loremaster Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Thomas Aquinas College, Santa Paula, CA Posts: 10,820	Lizra, while of course you know I can't officially condone any poem which says that any part of PJ's work was better than the correspondent part of Tolkien's, between you and me, it was well written indeed (even if I don't agree with all the content) __________________ Crux fidelis, inter omnes arbor una nobilis. Nulla talem silva profert, fronde, flore, germine. Dulce lignum, dulce clavo, dulce pondus sustinens. 'With a melon?' - Eric Idle

08-28-2003, 01:44 PM	#34
Elf Girl Lurker Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Lothlórien Posts: 3,419	There was a professor called Tolkien, But now all his works have been broken. Peter Jackson filmed fast, And with romance and laughs, He left of the books not a token. __________________ There's antimony, arsenic, aluminum, selenium...

08-31-2003, 10:39 PM	#35
*Tessar* Master and Wielder of the Cardboard Harp of Gondor Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: IM IN UR POSTZ, EDITIN' UR WURDZ Posts: 6,433	There once was a book, Called Lord of the Rings, by good J.R. Tolkien, A professor or something. And then came a man, on a loooong train trip, who opened the book, and just couldn't quit. Jackson's vision was grand, like a day in the sun, but the acting was bland, and the drama unfun! So then came the music, I really liked that! So moving! So bold! I ran out to buy that! On the way too the store, I tripped on a moth, who called me a fink, and flew off in a huff! And so to this day, I all ways do try, not to trip over moths, when music I buy! But back to the movie, with acting so bland, and music so bold, and dancing can-cans. The balrog was awsome, like a firey flame, which is rather redundant, but oh, what the hay. Good Gandalf I loved, his magic was sweet, his 'dieing' was bad, But I'm over that now, I think. There's no more to say, except it was grand, as a movie I loved it, as the book it was sad! ~~~~~*~ Annnnnywhoooo. I rock. And lizra, that was AWSOME! Hehehehe...

09-01-2003, 09:08 AM	#36
Lizra Domesticated Swing Babe Join Date: May 2002 Location: Reality Posts: 5,340	Yes you do! Watch those moths though! Dangerous creatures! Thank you ! __________________ Happy Atheist Go Democrats!

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