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Old 04-30-2003, 10:48 PM   #21
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Well... I can swoop when I need to but only if I've already bashed it out in my head which usually occurs when I'm in bed and half-asleep. Most of the time though I'm a basher. I wonder... could the style have something to do with who our favorite writers are? I know that I for one like to read and re-read books that I like and then pick out the things I like about that writer's style. The end result is a mish mash of all sorts of styles that works well for me. Does anyone else do this? Does any one else suspect that being a fan of Tolkien might contribute to any perfectionest or 'basher' tendencies we might might have?
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Old 05-12-2003, 04:17 AM   #22
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It's possible Tolkien swooped and revised heavily.

I like to swoop because I enjoy editing. I end up being a basher it I don't get on a good train of thought.

Sometimes I write out the key plot points so I can keep advancing.
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Old 05-12-2003, 04:26 PM   #23
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I'm definitely a basher. I'm an extremely slow writer, but I just can't move on to the next paragraph until the current one is the best I can do.

I even tried to swoop from time to time, but it never works for me. I can't just write the main ideas and correct them later; no, I need to find THE word that goes in that place. *sigh*
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Old 05-14-2003, 06:28 AM   #24
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I am definitely very much a swooper, my only problem is it takes a lot a lot of willpower to make myself go back and edit. Sure, I get plenty of ideas for editing and changing, but because I write so quickly, it seems such a daunting task and I get overwhelmed. Alas. And my current project is in serious need of a major re-write. More alas.
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Old 05-14-2003, 08:30 AM   #25
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Swooper. Majorly.

I can spew entire 27 page chapters in a day, and then ignore it for a week, and then revise it all again. This only works if I have all my character outlines, maps and backstory pages around me or in another window, though, or else I get distracted, lose the thread...

Swooping works for me though, but on reaching the final full stop at the end of my novel I left it for a few months, and am now into the revising, and this is taking up the time. Damn chapter three to hell, it won't behave.
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Old 05-14-2003, 04:11 PM   #26
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swooper. I'll sit down for a few hours and slap out a short story , then go back the next day or so and refine it a bit.
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Old 05-14-2003, 07:52 PM   #27
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I'm a bit of both, but when I get past my writer's block I'm usually a swooper. I find that it works better for me, because if I use the basher style I'll get stuck on a certain word or sentence and concentrate too much on that, thus forgetting important plot points and characterization that is zooming through my head very quickly.
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Old 05-16-2003, 08:41 AM   #28
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well....i am a "swooper" when i am writing a piece...usually the words just flow..but then between pieces and good ideas im more like a "basher"
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Old 05-16-2003, 11:43 AM   #29
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I would have to say I do my best writing as a 'Swooper', though I have periods of 'Bashing'. The Bashing periods are where I work out conflicts in storyline and plot to get them to meld, whereas when I Swoop, I lay down whole sections of the story in its various times.
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Old 05-16-2003, 02:39 PM   #30
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Swooping all the way! I wish I could speed type cause I worry I won't get it all down fast enough before muddling, or forgeting. I should "talk it" into a tape recorder! I really enjoy the editing. Eliminating useless sentences and words is very fullfilling. I have to watch that I don't go to far when I'm on the computer. Picking paragraphs is annoying to me. The editor at the paper would do it for me, to suit the copy needs, and that suited me just fine!
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Old 05-20-2003, 10:41 AM   #31
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Undoubtedly a basher. I cannot write anything without it being perfect. Then, I edit it viciously afterwards. Take for instance the time when my friend and I had to write something for History. We had to work together but I basically kept twisting everything she said so that it was good enough.

However, I am becoming somewhere in the middle now. Very glad - it took me only a 45 min class to finish this English essay- whereas previously it would have taken me that time, and much of that night as well to perfect it.

And if it's just normal writing, not for school, it still takes me ages to decide what I want to write. I hate awkward parts in my writing.
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