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hama1 · 11-10-2002, 02:24 AM

Eowyn, there is no way I could be offended by constructive criticism of my work. In the time that The One Ring has been "on-line" I have been called all sorts of names...I think my favorite was "The lyrics sound like they were written by a chimpanzee on crack."

No I welcome the critique. Just FYI, I originally wrote the script as an entirely sung through musical. I realized after the first read-through that wouldn't work so I "adapted" that original script into the more conventional book form of a musical that the show is now. Hence, with the subsequent re-writes I am essentially (and at times, with unfortunate results) adapting my adaptation of Tolkien's work.

Keep those cards and letters coming.

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11-10-2002, 02:24 AM	#1
hama1 Elven Warrior Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: NY and MA Posts: 133	Eowyn, there is no way I could be offended by constructive criticism of my work. In the time that The One Ring has been "on-line" I have been called all sorts of names...I think my favorite was "The lyrics sound like they were written by a chimpanzee on crack." No I welcome the critique. Just FYI, I originally wrote the script as an entirely sung through musical. I realized after the first read-through that wouldn't work so I "adapted" that original script into the more conventional book form of a musical that the show is now. Hence, with the subsequent re-writes I am essentially (and at times, with unfortunate results) adapting my adaptation of Tolkien's work. Keep those cards and letters coming.