09-29-2010, 10:37 PM | #11 | |
Elven Warrior
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: United States
Posts: 401
|
Quote:
Nerdanel, the poem is quite good, especially the 3rd stanza. I like how it ends. It leaves you thinking.
__________________
Elleth Valatari "We have come from God, and inevitably the myths woven by us, though they contain error, will also reflect a splintered fragment of the true light, the eternal truth that is with God. Our myths may be misguided, but they steer however shakily towards the true harbour, while materialistic 'progress' leads only to a yawning abyss and the Iron Crown of the power of evil." — J.R.R. Tolkien Last edited by EllethValatari : 01-13-2011 at 12:41 AM. |
|
|
|
Similar Threads | ||||
Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
Comments on my poems plz | Squirrel | Writer's Workshop | 2 | 09-24-2005 06:08 AM |
Collected Poems | Beruthiel's cat | Writer's Workshop | 0 | 03-25-2004 11:26 AM |
A couple of bad poems of mine. | Valaróma | Writer's Workshop | 7 | 08-15-2003 04:58 AM |
poems about the sea needed | eowyn144 | Middle Earth | 8 | 03-06-2002 03:46 PM |
[Fellowship of the ring] Are those poems of significance | photek | Lord of the Rings Books | 13 | 08-27-2001 02:24 PM |