06-15-2008, 02:20 AM | #14 |
The Black Númenórean
Join Date: Feb 2003
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You're doing great, I'm getting a kick out of it! One thing to watch for also is sometimes sentence structure and word choice, but those are less frequent. Doing fine!
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Your children are not your children. They are the sons and daughters of Life's longing for itself. They come through you but not from you, And though they are with you yet they belong not to you. You may give them your love but not your thoughts, For they have their own thoughts. You may house their bodies but not their souls, For their souls dwell in the house of tomorrow, which you cannot visit, not even in your dreams. |
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