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07-10-2007, 11:13 AM
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Leaf-Crowned Lord Of Elvenpath
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Heaven by the looks of it. Hell by the feel of it.
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Well... A nice story. But I didn´t completely understand it. You really should have put dots after the characters´ phrases. And you could´ve pictured the environment more. Otherwisse, well written.
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