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11-09-2006, 02:37 PM
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The Lovely Hobbit-Lass
Join Date: Jun 2003
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*claps hands* Delightful, Val! I love the banter between the friends and the dragon, especially those last bits. I also liked the way you captured the haughty air of the dragon--very Smaug-like, but also having its own personality. Well done!
Note: You might want to change 'accused' to 'accursed' (I assume you mean the latter) in Glorfindel's farewell to the worm.
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It's New Years Day, just like the day before; Same old skies of grey, same empty bottles on the floor. Another year's gone by, and I was thinking once again, How can I take this losing hand and somehow win? Just give me One Good Year To get my feet back on the ground. I've been chasing grace; Grace ain't so easily found One bad hand can devil a man, chase him and carry him down. I've got to get out of here, just give me One Good Year! |
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