Discussion Thread Number 3 Of Wraiths-Kings-Friends-Rings Campaign

Gordis · 11-10-2005, 02:32 PM

Nice post LMM. Only two small things.

1. May I ask you to add a sentence. The Chancellor is NOT going to leave the last word to Mahtaliel.

"I ignored nothing," she told him angrily, "You were blantently discourteous when you failed to inform me of this change last night despite having ample oppurtunity to do so!"

The chancellor smiled sarcastically, "Professor, I have more important things to do during the Annual Reception than to discuss schedules with you".

There was an awkward silence. Realizing that the rest of the professors were watching with visible interest, Mahtaliel attempted to calm down.

2. Please, remove "the Chancellor tried to calm down". I figure the Chancellor was quite calm inwardly and was much enjoying the fight.

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11-10-2005, 02:32 PM	#11
Gordis Lady of the Ulairi Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Minas Morgul Posts: 2,783	Nice post LMM. Only two small things. 1. May I ask you to add a sentence. The Chancellor is NOT going to leave the last word to Mahtaliel. "I ignored nothing," she told him angrily, "You were blantently discourteous when you failed to inform me of this change last night despite having ample oppurtunity to do so!" The chancellor smiled sarcastically, "Professor, I have more important things to do during the Annual Reception than to discuss schedules with you". There was an awkward silence. Realizing that the rest of the professors were watching with visible interest, Mahtaliel attempted to calm down. 2. Please, remove "the Chancellor tried to calm down". I figure the Chancellor was quite calm inwardly and was much enjoying the fight.