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Old 09-21-2005, 08:32 PM   #1
durinsbane2244
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song i wrote

a song a wrote, yay!:
[sounds incredibly better sung with guitar]

Dance With Death

Since the day, that jealousy arrived,
Many souls, have battles til they've died.
When it came, it brought a call to war.
Never once, had any fought before,
An open door.

See them come, the Warriors of Light.
Watch them fall, conquered by Night.
Some men stayed, to take a final chance.
No one came, back from their dance,
A fighting trance.

Meadows turned to battlefields,
And rivers running red.
The sky alight with cannon fire,
And strangers falling dead.

Rolling plains and grassy fields,
Turned into a makeshift grave.
Dirty roads and broken dreams,
All that's left of those who're saved.

Soldiers went, to answer to the call.
Weapons drawn, the odds were tall.
Rebel souls, they fought because they must.
Deserters all, fell to the dust,
No binds of trust.

Can't you see what's come to us,
Because of what we've done?
Can't you see the red horizon,
Bloodstains on the setting sun?

Can't you hear the crys of solders,
Fighting for a broken cause?
Can't you hear the screaming people,
Following the broken laws?

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We are the music-makers,
And we are the dreamers of dreams,
Wandering by lone sea-breakers,
And sitting by desolate streams;
World-losers and world-forsakers,
On whom the pale moon gleams:
Yet we are the movers and shakers
Of the world for ever, it seems.
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