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Old 01-24-2005, 06:54 PM   #1
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No explanations, just poems, yours too

b-r-e-a-t-h-e-…

Breathe Deep
the toxic paint smell
you know the caffeine
has rotted your brain away

Breathe deep
gasoline fumes
even if you can’t
smell the gas anyway

Breathe deep, Breathe deep
I’ve been shut off thru
lungfuls of air
hyperventilation won’t stop the
autonomic functions that
I can feel

Breathe DEEP
and when you feel down and dead
just pop another pill
one more pinch of drugs
remember to breathe again

BREATHE deep
I can feel my body fill
liquid entering with every breath
no longer solid
Jelly, almost flavored

BREATHE DEEP
If you have time for
one last breath,
make it a good one
and you won’t have time to

breathe deep
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