An Expression of Anger

[Ñólendil]

Hey everybody, only a couple of people have read this one (which I guess is true of all my poems), so I thought I'd share with everybody. Let me know what you think, like/don't like, think I can improve.

I don't have a title for it, but it is really just an expression of how I felt at the time, which was angry. So here it is:

I shall be lit with fire
And I shall burn so brightly
That they will turn away
From my face in fear,
In awe,
In wonder,
At the pulsing power
Of my human heart
That screams and crackles
In red, orange, yellow, green, blue
Hot blue flame.
Oh how it shall scream
The tongues of saints and sinners
In one tone of raw truth:
That though all worlds collide
And die down in shame,
I shall be recalled,
I shall be recalled,
By survivors,
Or new life,
As the man who burned so brightly.
Recall me, you damned fools!
Recall me!


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I'm not really sure anymore about that line naming all the colors of the flame. Do you think I should take it out, and just leave "hot blue flame"?