Some Poems

[Nurvingiel]

Great poem! It really grabbed my attention.

Hm... about the last verse, maybe:

I can't help but wonder:
is their deep bluen seen
as friendly pools?
or cold,harsh ice?


Or something?



I wrote a poem for my brother as a thank you for the belated birthday gift he sent me. I'd love to know what you think. It's hopefully a bit humorous. (He sent me a poem for my card.)


Here's a short peom for my bro
Whose rhyming musings I did know
Parcels! Parcels! Exciting stuff
One can never have enough.

Lovely bracelet, socks so warm
Books to weather any storm
Tasty soy nuts go down fine
With Finnish beer or Swedish wine.

So tack så mycket(1) for the gift
It will not cause a sybling rift
It was welcome, you should know
Over here in Umeå

And with that I'll say hejdå(2)!

Swedish translations:
(1) Thank you very much
(2) Goodbye

Pronounciation guide (aka see, my poem does so rhyme ):
(1) Tack so muka
(2) Hey doh