06-27-2004, 09:11 PM | #1 |
Enting
Join Date: Feb 2004
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Spiders
I've been throwing this new story idea for a while now and I've finally put it down but I still don't know wether I like it or not. It would be really nice if you could read it and tell me whether I should go on or not or give me some contructive criticism. As a warning, the story's very rated R because of language and drug use. Thanks so much. Spiders
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