05-28-2004, 07:28 PM | #1 |
A'mael Dalharen Eldarele
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Norway
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Just a little poem.
Just a little poem I wrote. I thought the structure was funny, so decided to post oh, and I bet you can see which verses has gone through more work than the others
Of King and Knight ...throughout the long night paced vigil they from siege to war to righteous crusade will heralds clarion homage lay echoing names of revenants true... ...where stories of noble battles grew in lands afar that's known to the few who walked the trails of somber hue battered men whom with swords parley... ...and of such men just one prevailed in battle for the kings own grail the soldiers cheered, the women prayed when hero rode to perill's core... ...where crimson dragon of ancient lore guarded treasure with fire blore to fry those came claiming ore high above a drear hemlocked hill... ...he soared and watched his lands until the knight came riding to fulfill his mission for his king gone ill the cure of dragons blood to bring... ...the dragon lunged for prey riding but mistake caused underestimating the knight whos lance was long and thin piercing dragon, deaths sudden lure... ...and home he rode with bottles of cure to knowledge and fame, a honored sir he cured the king but at evening he erred when doughter of king him to chamber enticed... ...and there the knight spent night after night till rumours of love between doughter and knight was known throughout kingdom and sight and king in anger permission refused... ...though knight and beloved lies abused to cover their love from rumours that roused but king quickly knew and their love was loosed when knight lost his head in the end of the day... ...but... ...throughout the long night paced vigil they from siege to war to righteous crusade will heralds clarion homage lay echoing names of revenants true...
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