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Old 11-03-2003, 09:33 PM   #1
elvishfaerie3088
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My work....

I've never used this, so i hope this is okay, if it's not could someone tell me what's it's supposed to be?

A Rose's Last Wish

It’s always the one you the love the most
That you hurt the most unintentionally
Its that you crave when no ones’ around
The one you see in your dreams
The one you’ve been waiting for…
His smile lights up your face tells you that dawns awakening the sky
He’s the one that puts fire into your eyes
He’s the one that can make you smile forever.
He’s the one you can’t live without.
If only he knew how you felt.
‘Cause he’s the one I’ve been craving for.
He’s the one that I could never tell how much I care
He’s the one that knows everything about me
He’s the one that can see into my soul,
He’s the one that opens my heart
He’s the one that hold the key
I never want to loose him
I never want to forget him
I’d cry every single tear I have if he ever left me
I only wish he knew.
You raise me up when I’m down
You cry my name when no one else will
You stand up for me when I can barely crawl
You’re the one you just haven’t noticed how much I care,
You always the hurt the one you love the most no matter what you do.
I don’t want to stop loving you
I don’t want you to love me, for I don’t want to hurt you.
But the way I crave you, is a way undeniable
I wish I could tell how I feel, but it seems so hard
I don’t want to fail you.
Hoping the stars will shine my way
Hoping they’ll lead me to you another way
Without having to tell you first how I feel
‘Cause I just can’t do it alone.
You’re the only one I need; you’re the only one I care about
You’re the only one I crave; you’re the only one that can save me
Save me from this bottomless pit.
Save me from the world alone.
Hold me tight and keep me safe
I know you’ll always keep me warm and safe
I only wish you knew how I feel
Could you love me, the way I’m loving you?
--------- A Dying Rose's Wish
yes it is my poem i just never sign my work with my own name it's always named something odd if you will.
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