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Radically Tolkienited
Join Date: Aug 2001
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Help
I'm writing a novel revision of the 12 Dancing Princesses, and I'm having a problem with 2 things. Dialogue...the characters sound too wimpish, too...too I dunno...unrealistic. And all of the characters are perfect. They don't have any faults, or defects in their personalities...at least the good characters don't. Even Frodo had a fault or two...but my characters don't. Any ideas? Tips? Hints? Or a couple of fish across the head to tell me to quite whinging at least
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