Priestess Empowered

Gwaimir Windgem · 06-23-2003, 02:58 PM

Is the tenative title of another work, the first in a trilogy. We had another writer's meeting recently; I was going to rewrite some more of Apostasy to take, but it became evident that the rewriting was going to take a lot of working out, mainly in the symbolism of rites. So I threw together the prologue of another work. This is only a barely second draft, so it ain't gonna be great. If you read this, I would appreciate it if you would take the time to answer the questions that follow, if no other Constructive Crit.

06-23-2003, 02:58 PM	#1
Gwaimir Windgem Dread Mothy Lord and Halfwitted Apprentice Loremaster Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Thomas Aquinas College, Santa Paula, CA Posts: 10,820	Priestess Empowered Is the tenative title of another work, the first in a trilogy. We had another writer's meeting recently; I was going to rewrite some more of Apostasy to take, but it became evident that the rewriting was going to take a lot of working out, mainly in the symbolism of rites. So I threw together the prologue of another work. This is only a barely second draft, so it ain't gonna be great. If you read this, I would appreciate it if you would take the time to answer the questions that follow, if no other Constructive Crit. __________________ Crux fidelis, inter omnes arbor una nobilis. Nulla talem silva profert, fronde, flore, germine. Dulce lignum, dulce clavo, dulce pondus sustinens. 'With a melon?' - Eric Idle