Read and respond please!

[Legolas_Frodo_Aragorn]

Heres a poem i wrote...what do you guys think?

The words we once spoke
together in the dark
the room spinning all around us
and landing gently
3 small words
i love you
and we were off in a game
to far to go back
to close to see ahead
but if we could have
what would we have seen?
a road that curved sharpley
but doubled back
like we were trying once more
if we had seen, what would we have done
stopped while we were ahead
or let time take its toll
all i know is that in the future
i will never forget
never forget you
never forget you whispering those words
i love you