03-22-2003, 11:29 PM | #1 |
Elven Warrior
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Over the river and through the woods.
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Poetry
Do any of you think that your good at poetry? My friend says that I have real talent! What do you guys think?
The Last Breath of Life As I looked into your eyes While you lay bleeding to death On the soft green grass, You looked into my eyes With a softness I had never Seen in you before, Then I knew that Outside your bitter image Was a sweetness, Even though I've known You for only a short time I feel like I've known you For all eternity, And now that your last Breath is soon to come I know that I will never Know more of your soul, Now as your chest stops rising And then falls one last time Tears fill my eyes thinking of One last soul that is lost. well, what do you think? Please post your poetry for all of us to read. Also no flames as comments please!
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