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Elven Warrior
Join Date: Aug 2002
Posts: 288
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HobbitChick88, Starr Polish, and Elfmaster XK... I love all three of those. This is one I like of mine... 'tis still not very good.
[Cursed] of the [Sickness][Cured] with the [Pain] 9/4/2002 Paint me the color of the sky Fall into your mind And corrupt your soul Fill your mind with lewd thoughts of simplicity Let your eyes scream hypocracy Just like your mouth saw red The blood red of horror And the fear of the knife That cut your soul And bled your wrist The copper of rust Because your blood, just as you, Wasn't pure anymore So it wasn't innocent crimson But tainted gold And slowly faded grey- to black Locked away in mystery And given to the surreal Of all the tire tracks that criss-cross my world, Yours cut deepest. I know... bad teenage poetry.
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