10-16-2008, 01:26 PM | #11 |
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'came' in the last line is not correct, and one word is still left - otherwise everything is fine.
Aravis is indeed the speaker, pretending to be someone else. Bonus point to Midge for giving both names. "And when I learned who she was, being delighted with her beauty and discretion, I became inflamed with love and it appeared to me that the sun would be dark to me if I did not marry her at once. Accordingly I prepared the necessary sacrifices and married your daughter the same hour that I met her and /_a_e/_e_u_n_d/with her to my own house."
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