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01-24-2005, 06:54 PM | #1 |
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No explanations, just poems, yours too
b-r-e-a-t-h-e-…
Breathe Deep the toxic paint smell you know the caffeine has rotted your brain away Breathe deep gasoline fumes even if you can’t smell the gas anyway Breathe deep, Breathe deep I’ve been shut off thru lungfuls of air hyperventilation won’t stop the autonomic functions that I can feel Breathe DEEP and when you feel down and dead just pop another pill one more pinch of drugs remember to breathe again BREATHE deep I can feel my body fill liquid entering with every breath no longer solid Jelly, almost flavored BREATHE DEEP If you have time for one last breath, make it a good one and you won’t have time to breathe deep
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How to Survive the Sillmarillion I thought that Alcohol was just for those with nothing else to do. I thought that drinking just to get drunk was a waste of precious booze. But now I know that there's a time and there's a place where I can choose To walk the fine line between self control and self abuse. "Lacerations make complications, but welts go away in a day." |
01-24-2005, 09:09 PM | #2 |
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Chill so much so I know I'll fall if I move an inch
Further Noon says "skiing on sticks" and I laugh And the ice laughs too Voices of other girls carry over And their words are not so different than my thoughts Of love of people of this time Somehow I'm gliding faster than I know to be Safe And not falling Just skating in circles and happy |
01-24-2005, 09:22 PM | #3 |
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Just a dirrrrty mental image
you had it first the two of you, joking, refrencing, flirting did I ever tell you, two, I wanted to do that too. It's never just a little jest with me I bit my tongue until it bled and the soothing taste let me let go GO HOME and I'm sorry every moment I can't see you again
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How to Survive the Sillmarillion I thought that Alcohol was just for those with nothing else to do. I thought that drinking just to get drunk was a waste of precious booze. But now I know that there's a time and there's a place where I can choose To walk the fine line between self control and self abuse. "Lacerations make complications, but welts go away in a day." |
01-25-2005, 12:03 AM | #4 |
Honourary Elitist Inklette
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lost words
only sounds left to make sense and i'm more moved than i can say this half dream half daze half wanting to stay asleep forever in this sound do you know? you whose sounds i hear centuries later and whose words are mere shadows of meaning did you ever guess the music of words and sounds? it wont let me go and today i still hear like the first time i heard these memories of sounds more permanent than any scar and more wounding i don't know my answer yet but i'm working on the conversation |
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