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03-01-2002, 03:44 PM | #1 |
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I made a song!!
I guess no one likes my poem then. I'm going to go sit under a rock and cry now.
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03-01-2002, 03:53 PM | #2 |
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I like it
but you inspired me and I got busy doing this one:
Your Ring by Arathorn (adapted from Elton John's Your Song) (Original Lyrics by Bernie Taupin) It's a little bit fiery the writing inside I don't quite dig tengwar, and that I don't hide Neither do I speak dark tongue, but boy, if I did Ash Nazg Durbatuluk, I'm sure it'll read If Mithrandir takes it, but then again, no Or any of the elf lords who walk on the snow I'll just have to bear it, it's the best I can do To Mordor I'll bring it, though precious for you And I won't tell anybody this is the One It may look quite simple but needs be undone I hope You don't mind I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world I walked down through mushrooms and kicked off the moss With Sam, Pip and Merry 'hope Maggot's not cross We're going to Bree now, and it won't be long Singing an old song: "The road goes ever on" Gandalf is gone now but trudge on I do Boromir's dead too and now we are two Gollum keeps pace but I hope he's not mean We caught him with Sam's rope, he sure is quite lean And I won't tell anybody this is the One It may look quite simple but needs be undone I hope You don't mind I hope You don't mind, but in Samath Naur We lost you you're Precious when Gollum left the world
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03-01-2002, 03:56 PM | #3 |
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*emerges from underneath rock*
That's really good Arathorn! By the way I've never had chance to say but I LOVE your signature! FRODO LIVES!
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03-01-2002, 04:31 PM | #4 |
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Wow! These are awesome! *scuttles off to write one of her own*
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03-02-2002, 08:55 AM | #5 |
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poems and songs
tee hee hee
these r soooo cool, but lets not 4 get the original song poem starter!! Arathorn urs is particularly cool! i like Your song by Elton John, its really cool, especially with LotR verses 2 go with it! And Strawberry, thats just hilarious, silly, extremely silly in fact, but hilarious all the same!!!
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03-02-2002, 11:14 AM | #6 |
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Thanks, you guys. I might come up with another one after midnight here but don't hold your breath just yet.
Hmmm, I think I'll take "Your Ring" and submit it to Rivendell.... P.S. Glorious G., I've made very minor revisions and added the original Lyricist's name
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03-02-2002, 12:18 PM | #7 |
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Yeah, I really like yours, Arathorn. Very clever! You definately should submit it...
StrawberryIceCream- Lord of the Dance is one of my favorite tunes- I sang yours to my roommate, quite good!
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03-02-2002, 03:52 PM | #8 |
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Ahhh. Your so sweet! And before anyone judges on my writing skills, That isnt my best writing (or rhyming actually) I just had 10 mins to spare before i could go on the internet.
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03-02-2002, 04:09 PM | #9 |
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wow arathorn that was amazing!it's really weird cos i was listening to the real your song earlier today!ur version is wicked!please post some more soon!
my friend came up with this idea of doing a song to "there's a hole in my bucket" otherwise known now as "there's a hole in my ring".its not very creative or funny but she seemed to like it. There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, dear Gandalf There's a hole in my ring, dear Gandalf, a hole. ok, now that i write it down, its really not as funny as it first sounded!if ne1 can come up with any better verses feel free.especially u gg or arathorn or STRAWBERRY!!!! as u seem to have a flare for this sort of composing.....writing...thing!
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03-02-2002, 04:16 PM | #10 |
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*sniff sniff*
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03-02-2002, 04:18 PM | #11 |
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y so glum strawberry?
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03-02-2002, 04:22 PM | #12 |
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You said only them were good at poetry.
I know it may not be that good but it's not that rubbish is it?
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03-02-2002, 09:28 PM | #13 |
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A bit of what I've come up with, this is Sauron's song.
(tune of "American Woman- original Guess Who version") Frodo Baggins, stay away from me. Frodo Baggins, hobbit let me be. Dont come a-hangin around Orodruin Tryin' to cast that Ring into Doom Ive got all of Middle Earth to rule You'll never escape my Nazgul. Now hobbit, 'said stay away. Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say. Don't try to come through Mordor Don't wanna see your little shadow no more My firey eye can hypnotize So say my loyal spies. Oh hobbit, 'said get away. Frodo Baggins, listen t'what I say.
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03-03-2002, 01:08 AM | #14 |
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awww, Strawberry, don't you dare cry,
I liked your poetry and that I don't lie That's how I got started writing "Your Ring" 'Hope we all get to posting more for them to sing Oh well, back to the other threads for now I'm reading about one that involves a cow.
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03-03-2002, 06:33 AM | #15 |
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Thank you Arathorn, you are very nice,
I loved your poem, I read it twice, I think every post on this thread should rhyme, From now until the end of time!
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03-03-2002, 12:21 PM | #16 |
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Great one, Earenya!
Keep writing, maybe we'll see macarenya (it rhymes) Maybe not rhyming all the time, StrawberryIcecream Even just remotely close to the theme Here's one from chicago With which I had a go A lot of the original lyrics were really good So I kept them in to preserve the mood, knock on wood... (Original lyrics by PETER CETERA's You're The Inspiration) You're The One Temptation by Arathorn You know my rule was meant to be The kind of rule that lasts forever And I need you worn on me From tonight until the end of time Elves should know, everywhere you go You're always on my mind, In my eye, in my soul malice CHORUS You're the One Ring of my life You are the temptation You bring suffering to their lives You're the desperation 'Wanna have you on me I wanna have you shining, glinting No one needs you more than my finger And I know, yes I know that it's plain to see They'll never win when we're together Now I know, that I need you here with me From tonight until the end of time Wraiths should know, everywhere they go You're always on my mind, In my eye, in my soul CHORUS 'Wanna have you on me I wanna have you shining, glinting No one needs you more than my finger You're the malice of my life You are the temptation You bring ruin to their lives You're the complication When you're that ambitious, till the end of time When you're that malicious, always on my mind When you're that seditious, till the end of time When you're that blasphemous, always on my mind When you're that ambitious till the end of time When you're that malicious, always on my mind
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03-03-2002, 01:19 PM | #17 |
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LOL arathorn!
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03-03-2002, 06:31 PM | #18 |
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Thank you, Arathorn, your flattery is kind,
I thouroughly enjoy reading your rhymes. StrawberryIceCream, your tunes are quite fun, I look forward to more of them in the long run.
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03-03-2002, 10:52 PM | #19 |
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anyody like Billy Joel? I'm gonna try some of that!
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03-04-2002, 01:41 PM | #20 |
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Here's an abridged one (Now the FINISHED ONE)
that I think I have done Originally by Billy Joel the lyrics need some fuel(whew) We Didn't Start The War (We Didn't Start The Fire) Iluvatar, Manwe, Feanor, Soronume Valinorian, Numenorean, Middle-Earth Telerian G'ladriel, Nerdanel, Tinuviel, and Undomiel Fangorn Forest, Lothlorien, all the way to Ithilien Uruk-hai, Ring-Wraiths, Oliphaunts and Fire Drakes Strider is the Elfstone, Aragorn the Dunedain Boromir, Faramir, Eowyn and Eomer Ungoliant, Gorgoroth, Sauron 's boss is Morgoth! We didn't start the war They were always raiding Since Melkor went stealing We didn't start the war No we didn't wage it Feanor's oath did it Palantiri, One Ring, Fellowship, Return of King Shelob, Olog-hai, Easterlings attack from nigh Beren, Luthien, Thingol had his Melian Sauron, Carcaroth, killed Huan and both were lost Saruman, Olorin, Radagast where have you been? Samwise, Pippin, Merry did the Morgul in Angband, Mordor, Beleriand near the shore Dagorlad, Morgulvale, Udun it does makes me pale! We didn't start the war They were always raiding Since Melkor went stealing We didn't start the war No we didn't wage it Feanor's oath did it Shadowfax , Asfaloth, Snowmane, and Bill is no sloth Eastfold, Westfold, Oh Rohan You had been told. Finarfin, Fingolfin, I don't know where has he been Bywater, Bag End, Sharkey's gone Grima did rend Firecrackers, Taters, conies near the craters Bruinen, Rivendell, Nazgul got caught in its spell Barliman still sits at Bree, when will it be ruffian-free? Bilbo Baggins, Frodo, left the Shire to Lotho! We didn't start the war They were always raiding Since Melkor went stealing We didn't start the war No we didn't wage it Feanor's oath did it Erebor, Mount Doom, Treebeard's voice went with a boom There's Ghan-Buri-Ghan, in the forest dwelt his clan Tol Eressea, Barrow Downs, Gollum's such a weird clown Glorfindel, Arwen, will PJ change plot again? JRR thinks he's Beren, Buried with his Luthien Christopher's H.O.M.E, I got to save some money! We didn't start the war They were always raiding Since Melkor went stealing We didn't start the war No we didn't wage it Feanor's oath did it Do Balrogs have got wings? kids like to debate these things Valinor, Undying Lands, Elves are safe in Cirdan's hands Ents took over Isengard, Huorns beat orcs when off their guard Denethor just lost his mind, Gondor is in such a bind 'Wonder where's the Gulf of Lhun, 'better get my map soon East Farthing Far Downs, Hobbits won't go out of town Man in the Moon Came down to Soon, Shire folk sure enjoyed that tune Periannath, Halflings, Hobbits killed the Lord of Rings! We didn't start the war They were always raiding Since Melkor went stealing We didn't start the war No we didn't wage it Feanor's oath did it EDIT: This is the FINAL Version (unless I make a correction)
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