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11-05-2006, 10:42 PM | #1 |
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Dragonmaiden discussion
The title says it all.
Give me your thoughts reviews, etc. More to come later
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11-06-2006, 12:23 AM | #2 |
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She thumbs her earlobe, just like Lews Therin Telamon!
Okay, more seriously speaking... I like the way you generate interest...how long is this supposed to be? I'd like to see some longer descriptions and mood sentences.
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11-06-2006, 03:52 PM | #3 |
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Of course you had to point that out, you WoT head!
I'm not sure yet how long it's going to be. I'll work on the discription and mood sentences, though. I realized I forgot soething at the begining of the post when i logged off.
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11-06-2006, 11:22 PM | #4 |
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Very interesting plot so far...you do a good job of raising questions of the reader, and not answering them right there in the story...yet. It keeps interest. Who are these people? What does the dragon key mean? (Don't answer those questions, BTW... )
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Adventure...betrayal...heroism... Atharon: where heroes are born. My wife once said to me—when I'd been writing for ten or fifteen years—that I could always go back to being a nuclear engineer. And I said to her, 'Harriet, would you let someone who quit his job to go write fantasy anywhere near your nuclear reactor? I wouldn't!' (Robert Jordan) |
11-07-2006, 09:31 PM | #5 | |
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11-12-2006, 10:42 PM | #6 |
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And so the plot thickens...
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Adventure...betrayal...heroism... Atharon: where heroes are born. My wife once said to me—when I'd been writing for ten or fifteen years—that I could always go back to being a nuclear engineer. And I said to her, 'Harriet, would you let someone who quit his job to go write fantasy anywhere near your nuclear reactor? I wouldn't!' (Robert Jordan) |
07-24-2007, 10:37 AM | #7 |
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Now it is done. Thanks to those of you who read it and gave me reviews.
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